Someone Waiting
- Peter Kam Fai Cheung SBS
- Nov 30, 2018
- 5 min read

FADE IN:
INT. HOTEL CORRIDOR-ROOM - DAY (Nov 24, 2018)
Using a hotel key, PETER opens the door of room 819. We see a basic room.
PETER (V.O.)
Pretty dull and boring...Its not
inexpensive either... but its the
cheapest I could get on a
Saturday.
A pause.
PETER (Cont'd) (V.O.)
It's near the Nagasaki Port. See
if I can watch sunset.
Peter surfs the web.
PETER (Cont'd) (V.O.)
Sunset at 5.15pm?
Peter checks his watch.
PETER (Cont'd) (V.O.)
I've got 15 minutes.
MONTAGE OF PETER GOING TO THE SEASIDE
A/ Peter gets out of the room.
B/ He deposits the room key at the front desk.
C/ He exits the hotel.
D/ He looks left and right, and then up at the sky.
E/ He walks quickly in the direction of sunset rays.
F/ He waits impatiently at crossings for the green lights.
G/ He passes through several buildings.
H/ He enters into an open-air car park.
I/ He finds an exit point, crosses the median strip and arrives at a park entrance.
J/ We see the sea.
END MONTAGE
EXT. SEASIDE PARK - SUNSET
Peaceful Nagasaki Port. Except its entrance and exit, the Port is surrounded by hills, hiding the setting sun.
PETER (V.O.)
Oh, here's not a place to watch
sunset.
Peter walks along the promenade. We see him enjoying the breeze and taking occasional shots. He then passes through the lit-up restaurant area with an illuminated sign:"NAGASAKI WHARF".
INT. NAGASAKI PORT TERMINAL BUILDING - NIGHT
Ticketing counter closed. Peter reads notices.
PETER (V.O.)
I can buy Gunkanjima tour
cruise ticket here... Vacancies
for Sunday schedules... 09:00
and 13:00. Good.
EXT. PEDESTRIAN WALKWAY - NIGHT
In the dark, an illuminated sign in pink gets attention. We see:"YOU ME".
PETER (V.O.)
That's the chain mall I frequented
in Hiroshima in January this year.
He follows the lights at the ground level, finds the entrance and steps inside.
INT. YOU ME - NIGHT
Peter steps out from a DAISO store with a plastic bag in hand.
PETER (V.O.)
Great that I bought a phone
charger here. I need not worry
about the low battery notice
any more.
As he begins to massage his belly, Peter compares menu photos of restaurants on the 5/F.
PETER (V.0.)
This one concentrates on frying
oysters. I must try something
not readily available in Japan
or Hong Kong.
Peter gets inside and does his order using gestures.
A beat.
Food is put on the table. Peter takes photos before eating.
PETER (V.O.)
Wow, it's delicious and
inexpensive.
He observes customers sitting near him are all having the same set.
INT. HOTEL - DAY (Nov 25, 2018)
Peter is up. The clock registers 0815.
PETER (V.O.)
Should I take the 09:00
cruise or the 13:00 one?
MONTAGE OF PETER GETTING TO A CRUISE TOUR
A/Peter packs quickly.
B/He checks out.
C/He knows his way.
D/Then he sees people queuing up at a pier to board a boat.
E/ He rushes to the ticket office.
F/ He gets a ticket.
G/He boards the crowded boat and stays at its stern.
H/ As the boat leaves the pier, Peter checks his watch which registers 08:53.
I/ We hear engine noise and see V-shaped waves dispersing from the stern of the boat.
END MONTAGE
EXT. GUNKANJIMA SEA - DAY
As the boat approaches Gunkanjima, the stern becomes more crowded. Peter attempts to take a selfie with the island as the background.
LADY# 2 speaks to Peter in Japanese, gesturing to take a photo for him. Peter shakes his head sideways politely but let Lady#2 take his spot.
PETER (V.O.)
I 've got one. In such crowded
conditions, it's hard to take
a good photo to prove "been
there, done that".
We see on Peter's phone screen a photo of just Peter and the island, despite the crowd around him.
We hear an alarm ringing from Peter's phone. We see him deleting the 10 o'clock alarm.
PETER (V.O.)
I prefer to be here now rather
than be woken up in bed now!
INT. TOURIST INFORMATION CENTRE - DAY
Holding two leaflets, Peter talks to a RECEPTIONIST.
RECEPTIONIST
(Pointing at one leaflet)
That one is a coach-ride
package tour...Taxis are outside.
Bus route 3 costing 150 Yen
would take you to the Cable
Car station. The bus stop is
just under the footbridge.
The receptionist writes some Japanese on a leaflet and passes it to Peter.
RECEPTIONIST (Cont'd)
Here's the station name in
Japanese.
PETER
Arigato Gozaimashita.
EXT. BUS STOP - NIGHT
Peter sits on a bench, waiting.
PETER (V.O.)
I feel like Tom Hanks waiting
at a bus stop in the Forrest Gump
film. I try to find out more
about myself and leave little
footprints in the real and cyber
worlds.
EXT. NAGASAKI ROPEWAY - MOUNT INASA - NIGHT
Peter is inside a cable car, capturing the Nagasaki night view. As the cable car climbs the mountain, we hear: "...The world's top three night views are Monaco, Hong Kong and Nagasaki..."
EXT. OBSERVATION DECK - NIGHT
Spectacular view. Peter captures the earthly stars from different angles.
PETER (V.O.)
While the night view may
be second to Hong Kong,
its observation deck has
an edge...
INT. HIKARI NO RESTAURANT - NIGHT
Few customers. Watching the stunning Nagasaki night from above, Peter enjoys his steak.
PETER (V.O.)
The last time I had a memorable
meal as good as this was at
Seattle's Space Needle...
We see the good moon rising.
PETER (Cont'd) (V.O.)
I should have more. And add
my life to years!
EXT. GLOVER GARDEN - DAY (Nov 26, 2018)
Walking up a slope covered with pebbles and dotted with tourists, Peter arrives at the Garden entrance. A STAFF delivers a leaflet to Peter, as he checks some notices.
STAFF
...light show...7.00pm.
PETER
(Nodding)
Thank you! I'll come back
tonight.
Peter walks around the area.
EXT-INT. MONUMENT BUILDING - DAY
We see in one column the inscription: 香港上海銀行.
PETER (V.O.)
Wow, this evidences how
prosperous was Nagasaki
over 100 years ago...
Peter steps inside and takes a few photos of the counters.
PETER (Cont'd) (V.O.)
I wonder if those working for
the Bank now would know
about this history...
EXT. GLOVER GARDEN - NIGHT
A few drops of rain. The many lights outshine the few customers. Peter looks for photogenic shots.
PETER (V.O.)
I meant to see the kingdom
of lights at Huis Ten Bosch.
But its quite far away from
here and hotels are very
expensive. This little kingdom
of lights in the historical
setting is right for me.
Peter takes videos of a garden fish pond from the verandah of a 19th C Western mansion, and from the garden, the Nagasaki Port.
Peter then hangs around the light show area. We can feel lights dancing with the show's music. He is the only one in the midst of the show.
PETER (V.O.)
Seems that tonight's show
is dedicated to me!
EXT. PEPPLE ROAD - NIGHT
Lamposts with yellow light reflections on wet pebbles. A better mood than the one during the day. Peter finds a right angle, takes a photo and checks it out.
PETER (V.O.)
Someone is waiting under a
lamp post....
Peter turns around and walks towards an empty tram car station.
PETER (Cont'd) (V.O.)
There's always someone
waiting...
FADE OUT. The End