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Peter Kam Fai Cheung SBS

FADE IN.

INT. SITTING ROOM - DAY

PETER's WIFE and their YOUNGER DAUGHTER are discussing.

PETER

Which university is your

number one priority?

YOUNGER DAUGHTER

Bournemouth.

PETER

I've never heard of it.

What'd you study?

DAUGHTER

Animation.

FLASHBACK

INT. SITTING ROOM - DAY (2014)

Peter's wife and their ELDER DAUGHTER are discussing.

WIFE

New Castle has offered

a place to your daughter

to study town planning.

Since you've retired, you

may consider accompany

your daughter for a while.

Peter nods.

CARD - A MONTH LATER

ELDER DAUGHTER

Chinese U has accepted

me. A dream come true.

I'm not going to New

Castle.

PETER

Congratulations!

FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK

INT. KINDERGARTEN HALL - DAY (2002)

Peter (48) wife and elder daughter (6) are watching a show.

PETER

Why doesn't she join

her class performance?

WIFE

She chose not to.

Peter looks bewildered.

END FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK

Peter talks to her elder daughter.

PETER

Remember when you

were at Kindergarten,

you didn't join the

graduation show. Why?

ELDER DAUGHTER

Well, I thought the show

was meaningless...

Peter looks enlightened.

PETER (V.O.)

It's only now that I know

she has independent

thinking when young.

It was hard for her to

get screened in in the

University selection

interview.

RETURN TO PRESENT

Peter looks at her Younger daughter.

PETER (V.O.)

Traditional universities

would not offer such a

subject.

FLASHBACK

INT. SLEEPING ROOM - DAY (2017)

Peter's wife is talking to Peter.

WIFE

Our younger daughter is

very unhappy in school.

PETER

Why?

WIFE

She has become the only

student in Art. Both the

School and the teacher

are not enthusiastic on

the subject.

PETER

She is distinctive in Art.

Without Art she can't be

admitted to universities.

WIFE

She wants to study

overseas, either UK or

Japan. Although she

speaks Japanese, she

prefers UK - for better

prospects.

PETER

Good thinking!

END FLASHBACK

INT- HOTEL, OXFORDSHIRE - DAY

Peter, his wife and younger daughter are having breakfast. People notices the younger daughter's white jacket with words.

PETER

Leavers 2019! From

Roedean?

Younger daughter nods.

PETER (V.O.)

I've observed that she's

more confident than

before, more willing to

speak up. Learning

from one's peers is

also important.

EXT. BOURNEMOUTH SEASIDE- DUSK

Beautiful long beaches. Peter, his wife and younger daughter look refreshed and are taking photos.

PETER

I don't know Bournemouth

is this beautiful!

INT. HALL OF RESIDENCE - NIGHT

As Peter, his wife and younger daughter come out of a room, a GIRL (19) at the corridor can't wait to meet and greet the younger daughter.

GIRL

We've got connected

via Facebook. I know

you're from Hong Kong

I'm from Bulgaria.

The younger daughter smiles.

GIRL (Cont'd)

Have you checked out

the boy who will be

occupying the room

between ours?

The younger daughter shakes her head sideways.

GIRL (Cont'd)

(Excited)

I've checked! He's

really cool!

Looking at his wife, Peter can't help raise his eyebrows.

GIRL (Cont'd) .

Are you going to the

party tonight?

As the younger daughter signifies no, they part.

WIFE

Isn't this a girls dorm?

PETER

Unlike Roedean, this's

a university!

INT. HOTEL, BOURNEMOUTH - NIGHT

Peter and his wife chat.

WIFE

I've already fixed my

hotel accommodation

in Fukuoka.

PETER

Yes, our elder daughter

will begin her Japanese

studies there in October...

Pausing.

PETER (V.O.)

From October, all our

children will be living away

from us...and from Hong

Kong...Not bad!

FADE OUT.

THE END

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