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FADE IN.

INT. SLEEPING ROOM - DAY

Waking up, PETER reads his phone clock.

PETER (V.O.)

My biological clock

is always more effective

than the man-made one.

I've to go to work on

the first working day

of 2020.

MONTAGE OF PETER'S FIRST WORKING DAY IN 2020.

A/ Peter does his morning routines.

B/ Peter shares breakfast with KAJI, his pet.

C/ In the 3-piece suit, Peter leaves home.

D/ Rushing out from a lift, a WATCHMAN (30s) opens the door for him.

E/ Arriving at a tower, Peter takes a lift up, alone.

END MONTAGE

INT. LIFT - DAY

Peter is watching his own image in the lift's mirrors.

PETER (V.O.)

Let me take a selfie

to document my

first working day in

2020.

Pausing.

PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd)

Am I too old?

INT. GOVERNMENT OFFICES - DAY

Peter then bumps into GENTLEMAN#1 in suit (50s) and they seem to recognize each other.

GENTLEMAN#1

Peter Cheung!

PETER

Yes! I met up with

your twin brother

in court months ago.

GENTLEMAN#1

Yes, I know! We

talked about you...

A STAFF (40s) intervenes.

STAFF

Is Guest#3 ready

to go?

Checking his guest#3 badge, Peter and gentleman#1 parted.

PETER(V.O.)

It was very good to

see him again.Two

old men now.

INT. LIFT LOBBY - DAY

Finishing work, a LADY (50s) chats with Peter as GENTLEMAN#2 (20s) looks on.

PETER

I've worked 40 years for

the Government. I'm

65.

The lady observes Peter's physical appearance.

LADY

You don't look that old.

You still have waistline.

PETER (V.O.)

I do a lot of twists and

turns while swimming.

LADY (Cont'd)

I came from Saigon

in the 1970s - not by

boat, but by plane.

Peter remembers something.

PETER

While Saigon was

falling, a classmate

of mine who was

never out of Hong

Kong flew to Saigon

to save his pen pal.

Later, they became

husband and wife.

LADY

What a romantic story!

PETER

Yes, but my classmate

passed away several

years ago...

GENTLEMAN#2

I knew that Mr Cheung

rose to the rank of

Director, and had done

a lot for Hong Kong in

bilateral negotiations.

PETER

(Smiling & nodding)

Yes, I've also worked

at the WTO, settling

disputes between US

v EU and Australia v

EU.

Lifts arrive and they go their separate ways.

PETER (V.O.)

(A little surprised)

I didn't expect to

have such an

enjoyable exchange.

I feel respected and

fulfilling.

INT. STUDY - NIGHT

Checking his LinkedIn message, Peter looks curious.

PETER (V.O.)

I've been nominated

as an emerging IP

Player? Am I too old

for that? Wouldn't the

Award Committee

find me too old?

Sounds like a first

joke in 2020.

EXT. ROAD - NIGHT

Coming out from a swimming pool, the wet-haired Peter suddenly remembers something.

PETER (V.O.)

My biological clock

is late this time to

remind me settling

the rent of my chambers.

I used to pay before

the beginning of the

month. I've lost my

consistency - too old.

Pausing.

PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd)

Fortunately, my heart

still beats!

FADE OUT. The End


 
 
 

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