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A Package Deal

Writer's picture: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS
  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. DINING ROOM - MORNING


  4. While having tea, PETER sees her WIFE coming in hurriedly.


  5. WIFE: Please drive up the car and take me to the hospital now!


  6. Peter looks astonished.


  7. WIFE (Cont'd): My mom's heartbeat is slowing down.


  8. PETER: Oh dear...


  9. EXT. ROADS - LATER


  10. Attentively, Peter is driving his wife.


  11. PETER: Is there any restrictions on the number of attendees?

  12. WIFE: There's nowhere to park the car.


  13. Getting off at a hospital block under renovation, Peter's wife runs towards the entrance.

  14. Act 2


  15. INT. CAR PARK - LATER


  16. PETER (V.O.): My Mom-in-law is 93...


  17. Focusing on his car's registration number 1333, Peter takes a photo.


  18. INT. STUDY - LATER


  19. PETER (V.O.): Let me answer a few Quora questions to divert my attention.


  20. Phone in hand, Peter reads notifications.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): One answer request is about whether I'll be remembered when I'm gone.


  22. Thinking.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): As for me, I remember those who have made an impact on me.


  24. Pausing.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I therefore infer that those whom I've made an impact on would remember me when I'm gone.


  26. After typing on his phone, Peter reads another answer request.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Does life stories repeat throughout history?


  28. Pausing.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Structurally, they do.


  30. Pausing.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We're born, we grow, we mature, we procreate, we decline and we die.


  32. Pausing.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But humans live on.


  34. After typing on his phone, Peter reads a WhatsApp message.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, my Mom-in-law has begun her long sleep. At 10.06am?


  36. Peter looks anxious.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Did my wife manage to see her Mom in time?


  38. Pausing.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When did she arrive at the hospital? She was the dearest to my Mom-in-law.


  40. Recalling.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was so disturbed by moments like this. I've lost the sense of time.


  42. Recalling.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We set off sometime after breakfast...


  44. Recalling.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):Have I had any time records of anything? I didn't send any messages.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh yes, I took a photo of the registration number of the car.


  47. Quickly, Peter taps on a phone image.


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It was taken at 9.55am. I had already taken my wife to the hospital about 10 minutes ago.


  49. Peter looks pleased.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Yes, she should be in time.


  51. INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT


  52. Peter and his wife are talking over dinner.


  53. WIFE: When I arrived, I could see some green pulse rate on the monitor. But it soon went flat. Did Mom know I was around?


  54. PETER: Yes! She should be able to feel it. You're always in her heart.


  55. Act 3


  56. MONTAGE OF PETER'S REMEMBRANCE OF HER MOM-IN-LAW


  57. A. Peter's MOM-in-law (60) urges Peter (39) and his wife to eat the food she has prepared.


  58. B. Peter's Mom-in-law (61), Peter (40) and his wife are visiting relatives in Bangkok.


  59. C. Holding her grand daughter (3 months), Peter's Mom-in-law (64) poses for a photo.


  60. D. Peter's FAMILY are visiting Peter's Mom-in-law (92) on Lunar New Year day 2020.

  61. RETURN TO PRESENT


  62. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): She's my very good and kind Mom-in-law.


  63. Sighing.


  64. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Life and death is a package deal of nature.


  65. FADE OUT.


  66. THE END


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