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A Personal Touch

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Dec 25, 2020
  • 3 min read

Updated: Dec 26, 2020

  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. SLEEPING ROOM - MORNING


  4. Sitting in bed, PETER checks his phone mail boxes.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Oh, a friend has made a personal reply to my personal brief X'mas Greetings in response to his earlier general one.


  6. Peter checks other phone notifications.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, my Quora story, the Tenant, has reached 1.8 million views during the night; and there's a second translation of it into French.


  8. Recalling.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I became a landlord for the first time in or around 1994.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My first tenant was a university professor, having a PhD. We had good landlord and tenant relationship.


  12. Act 2


  13. INT. SLEEPING ROOM - CONTINUOUS


  14. FLASHBACK


  15. INT. SLEEPING ROOM - NIGHT (Dec 1996)


  16. PETER (V.O.): Socially, the most important thing is to send X'mas greetings.


  17. FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK (Dec 1986 - Dec 1996)


  18. INT. RELATIVE'S HOME, WIGAN, UK - NIGHT (X'mas Day 1986)


  19. Carpeted sitting room. Peter (32) and his WIFE (31) chat with their UNCLE (40s).


  20. PETER: Your restaurant is closed tonight?


  21. UNCLE: Yes, only on X'mas day. One holiday in a year.


  22. PETER (V.O.): I know what life is like in the catering business.


  23. INT. ATTORNEY GENERAL'S CHAMBERS - DAY (March 1988)


  24. Peter is reading a note in his office.


  25. PETER (V.O.): Recruiting actors and rehearsing performances for X'mas? It's only March!


  26. Pausing.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The expatriate colleagues are really serious about X'mas.


  28. Peter overhears a remark from another office: It's never too early to talk about X'mas!


  29. PETER (V.O.): Perhaps, I should adapt to the culture.


  30. END FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): What X'mas greetings should I send to my good tenant?


  32. Pausing.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Sending a X'mas card isn't personal at all. Instead of asking him: how are you? Why don't I tell him: How am I?


  34. Peter writes his note: Me? Fine...


  35. RETURN TO PRESENT


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It was a unique and poetic brief message.


  37. Recalling.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My tenant wrote back and remarked that my note was humorous and stylish. That was encouraging.


  39. Recalling.


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The following year, 1997, was a year of change, a lot had happened.


  41. Pausing.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I believe relatives and friends near and far might care how my family was doing.


  43. Pausing.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): So. I began to write and share my family story in one page - easier for posting, faxing or e-attaching.


  45. Recalling.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It was very heartwarming to hear some replies; and I would thank them personally.


  47. Recalling.


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I became the Deputy Director of Intellectual Property, I extended my X'mas Greetings mailing list to include internal and external stakeholders.


  49. Recalling.


  50. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Gradually, my X'mas Greetings writing and publishing became my most enjoyable thing to do in Dec every year.


  51. Recalling.


  52. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Whenever I met up someone in person, our small talks began with my family stories. My unique X'mas Greetings became my personal brand.

  53. Pausing.


  54. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Since my official retirement in 2014, I've ceased sending them though. All good things must come to an end, otherwise they wouldn't be good.


  55. Act 3


  56. INT. SLEEPING ROOM - CONTINUOUS


  57. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Now, social media like Facebook, LinkedIn, What's App or WeChat enable anyone to stay up to date with anyone around the world.


  58. Pausing.


  59. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Everyday, I enjoy writing my stories, documenting how I live. Living my life is a very personal thing.


  60. Pausing.


  61. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): But I also publish my stories to the world at large, sharing what humanity can be, multiplying my joy incidentally.


  62. Pausing.


  63. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I believe all should welcome X'mas Greetings with a personal touch. This X'mas, I take a minimalist-readymade approach.


  64. FADE OUT.


  65. THE END


 
 
 

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