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Bentham's Reckoning

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Jun 30
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 07:00


  4. Sunlight struggles to pierce through the curtains. PETER nudges his WIFE, who is a lump under the duvet.


  5. PETER: It's seven.


  6. His wife stirs, groaning.


  7. PETER (Cont'd): The high-speed rail won't wait for you.


  8. His wife gets out of bed and goes to the bathroom.


  9. PETER (V.O.): There's no point for me to stay in my urban home while my wife is away with her friends.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My plan is to stay overnight in my NT home. I haven't done that for over 10 years.


  12. Later, his wife exits.


  13. Act 2


  14. MONTAGE OF PETER DOING HIS ROUTINES


  15. A. INT. HOME - 09:00. Phone. His Duolingo streaks. Seven languages.


  16. B. INT. HOME - 12:00. Piano. The jazz standard: Autumn Leaves. Nailing the bridge.


  17. C EXT. SILVERSTRAND BAY - 13:45. He swims. Four styles.


  18. D. INT. NOODLE SHOP - 15:15 Dumplings and noodles in soup. Not a drop left.


  19. END MONTAGE


  20. INT. LIVING ROOM - 16:00


  21. Peter puts his laptop and a mobile wifi unit into a bag. He talks to the MAID.


  22. PETER: I'll come back tomorrow for dinner. Take good care of the dog and the turtle.


  23. MAID: Yes Sir.


  24. Peter exits.


  25. EXT/INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 17:45


  26. Peter goes to the driveway, gets in his 2003 SMART City Coupe, starts it. As the engine roars, he engages the automatic and manuel gears.


  27. PETER (V.O.): Last time, it refuses to wake up to engage the gears.


  28. Then he goes to his 1989 NISSAN 200SX, opens the hood to reconnect the battery cables.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): If I leave the cables connected, the battery would be quite dead the next time I start it.


  30. He gets in and starts the coupe. It roars. He smiles. Leaving the cars idling, he enters the house and turns on the air-conditioners, the lights, and the audio systems on every floor.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Just to check what works and what doesn't. I'm going to spend a night here.


  32. Pausing.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Next, let me see what can I declutter?


  34. He sorts and checks a stack of papers and cards near him. Then he finds a light green UCL card with a quote by Jeremy Bentham. He reads it.


  35. PETER: Create all the happiness you are able to create; remove all the misery you are able to remove.


  36. INT. LAKESIDE MCDONALD'S - 20:30


  37. Peter sits alone at a long table overlooking a dark lake. A cheap value meal sits before him: a cheeseburger, medium fries, and a Fanta.


  38. PETER (V.O.): I won a UK Foreign Office scholarship to read an LLM in UCL in 1986...that's 40 years ago.

  39.  

  40. Recalling.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was full of ambition.


  42. Pausing.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And now, I create a lot of happiness for myself. And I remove my misery with my routines.


  44. Peter eats mechanically.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But Bentham's quote is about others, not oneself.


  46. Recalling.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I did donate to UCL...but not much.


  48. He looks at the wrinkled old man in the reflection of the McDonald's window.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Can I do more?


  50. Pausing.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I must confess it's just my wife on my mind now.


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 22:30


  54. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows a stylized quote of Bentham's reckoning : Create all the happiness you are able to create; remove all the misery you are able to remove.


  55. PETER (V.O.): When I was a civil servant, I designed and built Hong Kong's IP infrastructure. And after retirement, I volunteered to serve HKUST.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Indirectly, I create all the happiness I can and remove all the misery I can on scale. But Bentham's reckoning demands all - not just the systemic ones.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I should exercise my best endeavour to expand my service - from serving the many from a distance, to serving anyone up close.


  60.  The END


  61. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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