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Bus Stop No.7

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Jul 17
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. BEDROOM - 07:45

  5.   

  6. PETER lies in bed, the soft glow of morning light filtering through the curtains.


  7. PETER (V.O.): Another beautiful day.


  8. Peter sits up and looks at his sleeping WIFE.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): After breakfast, I'll drive to Silverstrand to swim.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I return, my wife is just about to wake up.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When my wife heads to the gym in the afternoon, I'll take the bus to my NT home.


  14. Pausing.


  15. PETER (V.O.): I'll stop over in Yuen Long to enjoy wonton noodles at the Mak's.


  16.  Act 2


  17. EXT. ESTATE BUS STOP No. 7 - 19:30


  18. Peter scans the empty road leading into the darkened estate. Later, a bus appears, Peter focuses on its glowing destination board.


  19. PETER (V.O.): Oh, this one returns from Central. I've never taken it before.


  20. Passengers alighting.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I worked in the Attoreny General's Chambers in Central from 1985, I had already bought my second home on the Hong Kong island side.


  22. Recalling.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Before that, I was studying law at HKU and waited at this bus stop for the early morning bus to Tsuen Wan...


  24. FLASHBACK


  25. EXT. ESTATE BUS STOP No. 7 - 06:30 (1983)


  26. The same shelter, but fresher. Dawn paints the sky bruised purple. Peter (29) appears. His hair is dark and thick.


  27. PETER (V.O.): I can't afford to miss the bus as I don't want to be late for the morning law lectures.


  28. An estate bus pulls up.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Just hope that there's a vacant seat for me. I'm boarding at Bus Stop No. 7.


  30. We see the bus driver check for a vacant seat before opening the door to let Peter board.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): From Tsuen Wan, I'd take the MTR to Central and then catch another bus to HKU.


  32. EXT. ON ROUTE TO HKU - CONTINUOUS


  33. Seated, Peter pulls out a Walkman, puts on earphones and presses Play.


  34. PETER (V.O.): Time to memorize...I've recorded the legal principles.


  35. Peter closes his eyes, immersed in the repetitive playback.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My classmates are young and bright. I'm old and dull.


  37. Peter repeats his way of memorizing in the Central-bound MTR carriage and on the bus to HKU.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was never late for the morning law lectures.


  39. Pausing.


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But, by the end of each day, I felt exhausted and had no energy left to walk up the one flight of stairs to the penthouse.


  41. Pausing.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It there're trespassers living in the penthouse for a month, I wouldn't have a clue.


  43. RETURN TO PRESENT


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Just then, I was in the penthouse, working hard to declutter as best as I could.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Of all the spaces in my NT home, the penthouse is my favourite.


  47. As the last passenger has alighted, the estate bus pulls away.


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I envy them; they're the lucky ones who will arrive home before 8pm.


  49. Pausing.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): During my time with the government, I rarely finished work before 9pm.


  51. As another estate bus heading to Yuen Long arrives and pulls up at the stop, Peter hops on quickly.


  52. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Now, I care less about the law but more on creativity, particularly in screenwriting.


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. BEDROOM - 21:45

  55.  

  56. Peter uploads an image depicting "Bus Stop No. 7 " to a draft on his laptop.


  57. PETER (V.O.): The Bus Stop No.7 remembers: the 06:30 dreams of a law student, the 19:40 sighs of a man decluttering his past.


  58. Thinking.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): At Bus Stop No. 7, time folds, the bus that brought me home young now carries me away old - same stop, different destinations.


  60. Reflecting.


  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I don't just wait for buses at Bus Stop No. 7, I wait for versions of myself that never boarded.


  62. FADE OUT


  63. END

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