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Odd Excitement

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Dec 21, 2021
  • 2 min read

Updated: Dec 22, 2021

  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. ROADS- 09:00


  4. PETER is driving his WIFE towards Central.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Autumn has ended. Today is the first day of Winter.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm driving my wife to work so that I'd pick her up in the evening.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I think we should go back to Hung Shui Kiu for dinner in one car rather than in two cars.


  10. Recalling.


  11. PETER: We didn't have Winter Solstice dinner in 2020 due to the pandemic. And in 2019, we were motoring in Japan.


  12. Peter's wife nods.


  13. Act 2


  14. EXT. QUARRY BAY PARK - 10:30


  15. Peter jogs a little.


  16. PETER (V.O.): The last time I was here was in Spring.


  17. Pausing.


  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In Summer, I went to Sek O or Big Wave Bay to swim.


  19. Pausing.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In Autumn, I didn't drive over from Kowloon as my wife drove to work herself.


  21. Recalling.


  22. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Yesterday, I was having a hectic time in court.


  23. Peter gets back to his SMART car parked on the roadside.


  24. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I haven't driven this car out of the car park for months.


  25. Peter checks the mileage shown on the dashboard.


  26. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I bought this car in 2003, and it clocked a little over 20,000 km.


  27. Pausing.


  28. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): For machines, too much resting aren't good for them.


  29. Recalling.


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Before the pandemic, I was travelling monthly, neglecting my cars.


  31. Pausing.


  32. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Since the pandemic, I'd start their engines at least fortnightly.


  33. Recalling.


  34. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh yes, I've written a nice song, celebrating the Winter Solstice.


  35. Pausing.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's a simple song in spoken Cantonese. It reflects my root.


  37. Pausing.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): On Winter Solstice, we've the longest and darkest night.


  39. Pausing.


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Somehow, there's the odd excitement in the air.


  41. Pausing.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It seems there's space for hope - everything would be better.


  43. Pausing.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I particularly like the lyrics of my song "Winter Solstice". I dramatize Winter Solstice and humanity somewhat.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But I really hope that the way we celebrate Winter Solstice will sustain until the end of time.


  47. Finding his song from YouTube on his smart phone, Peter copies the link and send it to chat groups.


  48. Act 3


  49. EXT. ROADS - 19:30


  50. Peter is driving the FAMILY in the dark.


  51. PETER (V.O.): At last, we're as one.


  52. Pausing.


  53. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): There's a need to slow down for the Winter Solstice.


  54. Pausing.


  55. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Take time to listen to Peter's song.


  56. Pausing.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And then to those things that speak without words.


  58. The family heads towards Hung Shui Kiu.

  59. FADE OUT


  60. THE END




 
 
 

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