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Five Hundred Miles

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • May 5
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 08:00


  4. Soft grey light filters through thick curtains. A digital clock by the bedside: 08:00 May 4, 2026. PETER lies on his back, eyes open.


  5. PETER (V.O.): May 4th again.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I chose May 4th, 1989 as my Nissan 200SX's delivery date.

  8.  

  9. Pausing.


  10. PETER (Cont'd): My international driving licence expired a few days ago. Let me apply for a new one as I'll be travelling again next week.


  11. Nodding.


  12. PETER (Cont'd): After breakfast, I'll go swimming. When my routines are done, I may go to the community center to get my Tentanus booster.


  13. Pausing.


  14. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): That should be a good May 4th.


  15. Act 2


  16. INT. LICENSING OFFICE - 15:15


  17. Cashier. Peter pays and receives a light green booklet with a date chop: May 4, 2026


  18. PETER (V.O.): It's valid for one year.


  19. Pausing.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): May 4th makes it easy for me to remember the expiry date.


  21. INT. COMMUNITY HEALTH CENTER: 16:00


  22. Crowded. Peter waits outside the injection room.


  23. NURSE: Chit no. 9.


  24. Peter shows his chit and his ID card. He follows the nurse as she leads him into the room.


  25. NURSE (Cont'd): Third Tentanus booster.


  26. The nurse preps a syringe.


  27. NURSE (Cont'd): You studied in a Catholic school? Nun gave you your Christian name?


  28. PETER: In 1966, I got into a Catholic secondary school. Admission required a Christian name. I didn't have one.


  29. NURSE: Men of your age in Hong Kong - unless they went to Catholic schools - they don't have Chrisitian names.


  30. PETER: There was this band - Peter and Gordon. I liked their version of "Five Hundred Miles". Either name worked for me. But Peter appears first in the duo's name. So.


  31. NURSE: Before I administer the shot, say your name.


  32. PETER:...Peter.


  33. The nurse administers the shot.


  34. PETER (V.O.): I feel like a walking fossil of an era...she reminds me of something.


  35. FLASHBACK


  36. INT. NARITA AIRPORT - 16:45 (29 April 2026)


  37. Check-in kiosk. An ANA ground STAFF is helping Peter and his WIFE to get the luggage tags and attach them to their luggage.

  38.  

  39. PETER (V.O.): I must confess - I'm always clumsy with attaching adhesive luggage tags to my luggage.


  40. Peter looks at her name tag.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Akeda, it says.


  42. PETER: Thank you Akeda san.


  43. Akeda is surprised, but delighted.


  44. PETER (V.O.): Probably no one do that. They say "thank you" to the air. Not to the person.


  45. They part.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Have I made her day?


  47. RETURN TO PRESENT


  48. The nurse finishes tapping the cotton ball.


  49. PETER (Cont'd): And what's your Christian name?


  50. The nurse steps back, smilingly.


  51. NURSE: I'm not going to tell you.


  52. PETER (V.O.): Why not? I'm the kind of man who would remember that. Maybe she's not sure she deserves that.


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. BEDROOM - 22:30


  55. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It depicts a light green Suzuki kei car parked on a grassy field in front of blooming cherry blossom trees.


  56. PETER (V.O.): Today, I recall 1966, 1989, and Spring 2026, when my wife and I drove around 500 miles from New Chitose to Hakodate and back.


  57. Thinking.


  58.  PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I thanked Akeda by name. It's my small act of return. She deserves it.

  59.  

  60. Reflecting.


  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I got the nurse's initial on the immumization record, but I don't know her name. Perhaps, not every connection requires full disclosure. Sometimes the unresolved moment is the point.


  62. The END


  63. FADE OUT


 
 
 

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