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Follow The Formula

Writer's picture: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS

Updated: Feb 18, 2020

  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. SLEEPING ROOM - DAY


  4. PETER wakes up, seeing KIJI, his pet, is still fast asleep by his side.


  5. PETER (V.O.): I dreamt about doing an exam. I wasn't alert enough, didn't to have a proper pen and an answer book to write on. I must have performance anxiety.


  6. FLASHBACK


  7. INT. STUDY - DAY (YESTERDAY)


  8. Sitting behind his computer, Peter uses devices to research.


  9. PETER (V.O.): I was quite comfortable with my leisure writing. As the Korean "Parasite"' can get Oscar awards, I'd better take my screenplay writing more seriously.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Some of my social media links became obsolete - Blogger, Google+, and soon Facebook desktop App. My favourite wix.com's blogging support has become different. Let me refresh my websites and screenplay writing.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I want to document my moments and memories. Life is not as dramatic as fictional stories. But I enjoy the creative process - one meaning of life.


  14. Act 2


  15. INT. SITTING ROOM - NIGHT


  16. Phone in hand, Peter is researching.


  17. PETER (V.O.): In writing better screenplays, let me follow closely Blake Snyder's beat-sheet formula.


  18. Surfing the web, Peter looks shocked.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, he passed away in 2009 - years before I heard of his name and his seminal work: "Saving the Cat". I'm three years senior to him.


  20. Looking at the images of a GENTLEMAN on screen, Peter sighs.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Life can be twisty and shifting His Beat Sheet is one of his legacy. I like how he explains the plot structure of successful stories told by Hollywood.


  22. Thinking.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me follow the formula and write seriously scene by scene. See if a story so told would make a difference.


  24. Reflecting.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): As many authors follow their hearts and won't follow any screenplay writing formula, there's always the need to adapt a good story into a screenplay before a film about the story is made.


  26. Pausing.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Without a good screenplay, there won't be a good film.


  28. Pondering.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But one has to invest a lot of labour, skill and judgment in writing a screenplay.


  30. Reflecting.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But that's how screenplay writers and others can enjoy more the creativity, not to mention the films' impact on people's attitude and culture.


  32. INT. STUDY - NIGHT


  33. Working behind his computer, Peter has also had two iPhones, one iPadmini and a Nokia nearby.


  34. PETER (V.O.): As I create every day with different messages, I've different websites. To update them all in a day or two is a lot of work. But now is the right time to get them done.


  35. Checking the computer screen, the pages have become unresponsive.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My computer is quite old too.


  37. Peter presses Ctrl+Alt+Delete again and again, Peter also picks up a guitar nearby and strikes a few strums.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It seems that my computer finds it too tiring to attend to so many instructions.


  39. A table clock indicates 00:45. Peter leaves his seat.


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I just let my computer work it out overnight if it isn't striking at all.


  41. END FLASHBACK


  42. Act 3


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It seems that my mind has been with my computer too. That's why I had the stressful dream.


  44. Reflecting.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But I wake up alright! Let me and my computer press on.


  46. It's another morning for Kaji too.


  47. INT. STUDY - DAY


  48. Working busily before his computer, Peter looks pleased.


  49. PETER (V.O.): I've done what I want to do. I'm now prepared to do better than before!


  50. FADE OUT.


  51. THE END.



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