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Kaji: The Wrong Side of the Door

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Aug 24
  • 2 min read
  1. FADE IN

  2.  

  3. Act 1

  4.  

  5. INT. HOME - LAST NIGHT


  6. The soft glow of overhead lights casts a warm ambiance across the living room. KAJI watches as the PACK LEADER steps out of the room, while PETER heads toward the bedroom.


  7. KAJI (V.O.): I'm alone.


  8. Kaji walks slowly around the room.


  9. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): The water inside me is heavy. It's a pressing need.


  10. Kaji glances at her pee pad nearby.


  11. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): Why don't I try a different one?


  12. Kaji jumps up onto the sofa that the Pack Leader always sits on.


  13. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): Her spot is soft. It smells of her.


  14. Kaji squats on the spot and soon a wide dark patch spreads on the fabric.


  15. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): I've relieved myself with style.


  16. Act 2


  17. INT. HOME - LATER


  18. Key sounds. The main door opens. The Pack Leader enters, looking tired. Kaji goes to welcome her back.


  19. KAJI: You've come back.


  20. Soon, the Pack Leader's eyes land on the dark stain on her sofa.


  21. PACK LEADER: OMG!


  22. Kaji doesn't move. She doesn't even lift her head.


  23. PACK LEADER (Cont'd): How could you forget those years of training?


  24. Kaji's eyes shift to look at the Pack Leader, full of dread.


  25. PACK LEADER (Cont'd): Bad dog! Your pee pad is right there!


  26. The Pack Leader points accusingly at the spot.


  27. PACK LEADER (Cont'd): This is my spot! Not your new toilet!


  28. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): She's furious.


  29. The Pack Leader grabs a soaking wet towel from the kitchen, determined to dilute the stain and to eliminate the oder of urine.


  30. PACK LEADER (Cont'd): The scent of your urine fills the air!


  31. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): My foolish adventure. I've spoiled the nest.


  32. PACK LEADER (Cont'd): No bedroom for you tonight!


  33. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): What? We always sleep together.


  34. PACK LEADER (Cont'd): You think about what you did. You stay outside the bedroom.


  35. The Pack Leader turns her back. She goes to the bedroom door and opens it.


  36. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): Would she change her mind...


  37. Kaji takes a tentative step forward.


  38. PACK LEADER (Cont'd): No!


  39. The Pack Leader gives Kaji a stern look, and points to a spot on the floor just behind the door.


  40. PACK LEADER (Cont'd): Here. You sleep here.


  41. The door closes, leaving Kaji alone in the dim hallway, on the wrong side of the door.

  42.  

  43. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): A closed door is a conversation ended by wood.


  44. Pondering.


  45. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): Every "inside" exists only because there is an "outside".


  46. Pausing.


  47. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): The view from the outside is always clearer. It's there I see the exact value of what I've lost.


  48. Kaji stares at the base of the door. We can hear the Pack Leader and Peter talking inside.


  49. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): Have I also disappointed Peter?


  50. Kaji lies down, her nose almost touching the gap under the door.


  51. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): I can hear Peter sighing.


  52. Kaji lets out a quiet sigh.


  53. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): I knew the meaning of home only once I was left outside of it.


  54. Act 3

  55.  

  56. INT. HOME - DAY


  57. Kaji is still lying behind the door. She hasn't moved.


  58. KAJI (V.O):  To return to the bedroom, I must find peace with the floor outside.


  59. Thinking.


  60. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): Finding peace is the quiet patience that comes from believing a closed door will eventually open again.


  61. Reflecting.


  62. KAJI (V.O) (Cont'd): The first step back inside isn't taken my feet, it's marked by a profound silence on the wrong side of the door.


  63. FADE OUT

  64.  

  65. THE END

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