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Navigating Negativity

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Apr 2
  • 3 min read



  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. LIVING ROOM - 18:30


  5. As PETER emerges from the corridor, he spots Kaji, the family pet, perched in her carrier cot.


  6. PETER (V.O.): You've just had a walk in the park.


  7. Kaji turns her head to gaze at Peter.


  8. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can read your expression: Why you couldn't join us like you used to?


  9. Peter reaches out to pet Kaji's head affectionately.


  10. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Humans also need space - there're human relationships remain beyond your understanding.


  11. Pausing.


  12. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Dogs are inherently loyal, but when a human remains loyal to another narcisistic individual, it can be toxic.


  13. Pausing.


  14. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I wholeheartedly love your pack leader, but she has been under the influence of a narcisistic individual...


  15. Act 2

  16.  

  17. FLASHBACK


  18. EXT. YEOJWACHEON STREAM, JINHAE - 15:00 (25 March 2025)

  19.  

  20. Twelve PEOPLE gather on a bridge, where KONG and MAGGIE engage in a lively conversation with Peter and his WIFE.


  21. KONG: You might want to keep an eye on your husband.


  22. Peter's WIFE: I'm very open-minded and am completely fine with him seeing other people.


  23. PETER (V.O.): That's not good news to me...


  24. Peter observes the body languages of those around him.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Is my wife telling our relatives that she doesn't care about me at all?


  26. EXT. JEHWANGSAN PARK - 15:45


  27. A tour coach carrying the group comes to a halt. The GUIDE speaks.


  28. GUIDE: From up there in the Park, you can catch a glimpse of the sea.


  29. KONG & MAGGIE: We'd rather stay in the coach.


  30. At 16:30, we spot the rest of the group using the Park's toilets before returning to the coach.


  31. GUIDE: The next sight-seeing spot is an hour's drive away.


  32. KONG: I'd better go to the toilet first.


  33. As there aren't public toilets nearby, we see the Guide asking shopkeepers for Kong's convenience. Maggie remains in place.


  34. EXT. ROADS TO HAEUNDAE - 18:45


  35. After navigating through traffic jams, the coach finally comes to a stop. The guide, Peter and a few relatives hurry out. Kong and Maggie stay seated.


  36. PETER (to Guide): Are there any public toilets here? I can tell Maggie is desperate; she hasn't used the restroom since lunch.


  37. GUIDE: No. Wouldn't you all like to chase the cherry blossoms?


  38. PETER: How can we do that in these circumstances? We'd better head straight to the restauarant.


  39. As Peter boards the coach, he hears someone say loud and clear from behind: You're the one who's really desperate!


  40. PETER (V.O.): Oh, I feel as though I've been stabbed in the back!


  41. Sitting at the rear row, Peter struggles to hold back his outbourts.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I know Maggie; she accommodates the host's convenience. As the host, I need to take care of her too.


  43. Peter's face flushes with embarrassment.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Yet now, someone is criticizing me for being selfish. It's surprising that someone assumes such a dominant role.


  45. INT. MIPO-JIB HAEUNDAE - 19:00


  46. As the group arrives, Peter sees Maggie heading toward the restrooms, her expression clearly one of discomfort.


  47. PETER (V.O.): During one long drive in Qingdao in 1996, I was so desperate that I urged the coach driver to stop so that I could urinate in public - after all, I'm a man.

  48.  

  49. INT. LOTTE HOTEL - O3:00 (26 March, 2025)


  50. Sharing a room with his younger SON, who sleeps soundly, Peter is awake.


  51. PETER (V.O.): It's hard to quiet my racing thoughts, especially when my wife is sharing a room with that someone.


  52. Peter types a message and concludes it with: from your husband who truly loves you.


  53. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I hope that someone isn't my wife's emotional spouse.


  54. RETURN TO PRESENT


  55. Act 3

  56.  

  57. INT. LIVING ROOM - 20:15

  58.  

  59. Peter inserts an AI drawing titled: "Navigating Negativity..." to a draft on his laptop.

  60.  

  61. PETER (V.O): In the storm of negativity, I find my anchor in positivity and equip myself with resilience.


  62. Thinking.


  63. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Every wave of negativity can be a lesson in strength if I learn to ride it.


  64. Reflecting.

  65.  

  66. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): To navigate negativity is to chart a course toward inner peace amidst chaos.


  67.  FADE OUT


  68. END



 
 
 

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