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Perfect To Me

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Jan 11, 2023
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. ROADS TOWARDS CHAI WAN - 09:15


  4. Driving a blue Mercedes, PETER sees a green Beetle in the rear mirror.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Ha, that's my wife. She's going to Central to work.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm going to a repairer in Shau Kei Wan to perfect the paint of the car.


  8. Entering a cross-harbour tunnel.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can collect the car in the afternoon.I haven't decided where to go after depositing it.


  10. Heading in the direction of Shau Kei Wan.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I haven't gone to the repairer for many years. It provides unique and efficient repainting service.


  12. Later, Peter deposits the car with STAFF wearing "Dream Colour" sweaters.


  13. Act 2


  14. EXT. MTR CABIN - CHAI WAN MTR STATION - 10:00


  15. Peter is glued to his smart phone. When the train stops, Peter looks up and sees "Chai Wan" signages.


  16. PETER (V.O.): Oh, I meant to go to Wan Chai... I've taken the train going in the opposite direction.


  17. Pausing.


  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I meant to go swimming. There should be other public swimming pools in Chai Wan.


  19. Getting off the train, Peter surfs Google Maps with his smart phone.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The Chai Wan swimming pool is about 20 minutes walk from here. It closes at noon.

  21. EXT. CHAI WAN MTR STATION - CHAI WAN SWIMMING POOL - 10.20


  22. Smart phone in hand, Peter walks with hesitation.


  23. PETER (V.O.): Finding a place on the ground is very different from finding a place on the map.


  24. Walking past roundabouts and streets.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've never been here.


  26. Later, Peter sees the signage "Chai Wan Swimming Pool".


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's very quiet here.


  28. Peter then reads a notice: Annual Maintenance...1.11.2022 - 31.3.2023...


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, the Google information was dated... But service is available in the Siu Sai Wan Swimming Pool.


  30. Peter checks Google Maps.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I arrive there, I could only swim for less than an hour...


  32. Peter sees a small park up a hill.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I may just have some special "me-time" up there now.


  34. EXT. PARK - 10:45


  35. Sitting in a bench, Peter sees a closed swimming pool down under.


  36. PETER (V.O.): The turtles decor reminds me of my pet turtle, the late Nana.


  37. Zooming in with his smart phone, Peter captures an image.


  38. INT. MOMOKU, SIU SAI WAN MALL - 12:40


  39. A Korean stone pot rice before him. Peter stares at two small cups of sauces near it.


  40. PETER (V.O.): This is a preparatory meal. My wife and I will fly to Seoul this Friday to see our elder daughter.


  41. Pausing.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We last met in person in Dec 2019. And I haven't been to South Korea since 2015.


  43. Peter samples the sauces.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): One is too spicy for me. I've got to remember that.


  45. INT. SIU SAI WAN SWIMMING POOL - 13: 20


  46. Appearing, Peter looks around.


  47. PETER (V.O.): This one can't be compared with the one in Wan Chai.

  48. Pausing.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Having just eaten, I'd only exercise moderately.


  50. Later, resting by the pool wall, Peter sees SWIMMER#1 scolding SWIMMER#2 for blocking her way.


  51. Act 3


  52. EXT. ROADS TOWARDS WAN CHAI - 16:30


  53. Driving a cleaned blue Mercedes, Peter slows down at nearby road works.


  54. PETER (V.O.): Not caring about my direction, I've gone to Chai Wan.


  55. Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Exploring the parts of Chai Wan that are new to me, I remember the moments.


  57. Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): While my moments aren't perfect to others, they're perfect to me.

  59. THE END


  60. FADE OUT












 
 
 

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