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Season's Greetings from John

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 15 minutes ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. LIVING ROOM -11:30


  4. A cluttered room. PETER reads an incoming mail on his phone.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Season's Greetings from John.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): John was the former HKUST Council Vice-Chair. He's now the Council Chair of CUHK.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We first met in 2016 when I was asked to help out with HKUST's Knowledge Transfer Committee (KTC).


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I retired as HKUST Council Member earlier this year, I also relinguished my Chairmanship of KTC.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I spent years proving my capacity to the world. John's greetings remind me of the years when the world doubted it.


  14. Act 2


  15. FLASHBACK


  16. INT. STUDY - NIGHT (1971)


  17. Peter (17) at a small table, under a single bulb. Textbooks are open. One stack for his HKU matriculation course, the other is for the CUHK matriculation.


  18. PETER (V.O.): The CUHK matriculation syllabus is totally different from the HKU one. But I'll sit for the CUHK exam in 1972 as a private candidate.


  19. INT. STUDY - NIGHT (1972)


  20. The CUHK books are gone. Only the HKU stack remains.


  21. PETER (V.O.): I failed in my CUHK matriculation. I need to refocus on my HKU matriculation studies.


  22. INT. STUDY - DAY (1973)


  23. Holding a letter, Peter (19) looks dejected.


  24. PETER (V.O.): I matricated. I passed the HKU exam...


  25. Pausing.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I applied to read English Literature. I was offered a second attempt.


  27. Pausing.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Later, I learned that classmates who matriculated like me were offered to read Law and Architecture.


  29. INT. PAK KAU SECONDARY SCHOOL - DAY (1974)


  30. Teachers' office. Peter (20) sits near the back, marking papers. SHARON (19) is at her desk in the front, focused on her own work.


  31. PETER: We teach. And we study. My second attempt for HKU, your second attempt for CUHK.


  32. Pausing.


  33. PETER (Cont'd): Sharon, would you care to join me for a glass of milk later? I think we both deserve it.


  34. Sharon pauses, considering, then nods with a smile.


  35. INT. SHARON'S FAMILY FLAT - DAY


  36. Sharon let's out a shriek, holding a letter.


  37. SHARON: I'm in! I'm in Peter! Music! CUHK!


  38. Peter congratulates Sharon, his joy for her real, but behind his eyes, a shadow of his own waiting game.


  39. RETURN TO PRESENT


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In the summer of 1974, Sharon got a letter that began her future. I got one that began my ghost story.


  41. Pausing.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Then, holding the "Pass" was the same as failure, when I didn't have the financial means to further studies in universities overseas.


  43. Pausing.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The admission board may ask, "Why do you want to study here?" They never ask, "What will you become if you can't?"


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Matriculation proves I can climb the wall. Admission decides if I'm allowed to plant a garden on the other side.


  47. Pausing.


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Society recognizes the graduate. It takes little notice of the one who was just as smart, but didn't have a chance to read in a university.


  49. Pausing.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Success has a timestamp. Mine arrived seven years late, and the feel of London rain, not Hong Kong campus grass.


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. LIVING ROOM - 23:00


  53. Peter uploads a photo symbolising Season's Greetings in a draft on his laptop.


  54. PETER (V.O.): My wife and I financed our children's journey across the ocean we knew it was too wide to cross. 


  55. Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Two admissions defined me: HKU's refusal and my children's acceptance. One taught me pain; the other taught me purpose.


  57. Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The past is not a weight to be dropped, but a stone in the foundation. I no longer trip over it; I stand upon it.


  59.  END


  60. FADE OUT


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