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Still Here

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • May 16
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. LIVING ROOM - 09:00


  5. Soft golden light spills over a cluttered desk. PETER sits on a sofa scrolling through birthday messages on his smartphone.


  6. PETER (V.O.): Oh, thank you for the birthday wishes! Lovely to hear from all of you...


  7. Peter expresses his gratitute in writing.


  8. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Turning 71 feels special, and hearing from relatives and friends made my day even brighter!


  9. Peter continues to type on screen.


  10. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My Dad and Mum brought me into this world today, 71 years ago, at Tung Wah Hospital.


  11. Pausing.


  12. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Months ago, I traced my roots and visited the Hospital.


  13. Pausing.


  14. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My first wife, Sharon, passed away in 1992, at the age of 36, and my Dad followed in 2011 at 79. My Mum and I are still here.


  15. Act 2

  16.  

  17. INT. STUDY/STUDIO - 10:OO


  18. Peter prepares for his Duolingo routine. He opens the app and selects Korean.


  19. PETER (V.O.): My new wife and I are learning Korean alongside our elder daughter who did it at SNU.


  20. Prastising Korean.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We're thrilled to hear yesterday that she got a job offer in Seoul, where her colleagues, like her, speak at least three languages: Korean, English and Chinese.


  22. After studying Korean, Peter chooses Japanese and starts practising it.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In her final interview, she was also assessed in her Japanese language skills.


  24. Smiling.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It was her learning Japanese in Japan that brought her and her beloved together.


  26. In addition to her elder daughter's birthday wishes, Peter also receives greetings from his son-in-law in Korean.


  27. EXT. SILVERSTRAND BAY - 14:00


  28. Striding into the water, Peter swims steadily, his breath rhythmic.


  29. PETER (V.O.): I swim every day when I can, and the wishes come true.


  30. Peter emerges, looking at the horizon.


  31. INT. STUDY/STUDIO - 16:00


  32. Boxes of old papers, books and memorabilia surround Peter.


  33. PETER (V.O): I've already cleared out all my guitars, amplifiers, and the Clavinova. 


  34. Peter picks up a sheet containing simplified notes for the melody along with guitar chords.


  35. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): I don't think I've made a MV for this song.


  36. Pausing.


  37. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Taking the Beatles as an example, I believe composing songs on the keyboard adds depth and richness to the music.


  38. Recalling.


  39. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Since COVID, I've been learning to play the keyboard.


  40. INT. DINING ROOM - 20:45


  41. As seafood is placed on the table. Peter opens a Kawai and starts to play "A Summer Place".


  42. PETER (V.O): I haven't played in about 10 days, and I don't feel like I'm playing as well as I used to.


  43. FLASHBACK


  44. INT. IN FLIGHT - DAY (6 May 2025)


  45. Peter is watching a documentary: Fuzjko Hemming: A Pianist of Silence & Solitude.


  46. PETER (V.O): Wow, the pianist's fingers dance across the keyboard, even though she relies on a frame to walk.


  47. Watching intensely.


  48. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): I see. She practises playing the piano every day, even though she doesn't feel inclined to do so.


  49. RETURN TO PRESENT


  50. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): To do anything well, I need to practise every day.


  51. Wondering.


  52. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): The paradox of time is this: the days feel long, yet the years fly by.


  53. Act 3

  54.  

  55. INT. LIVING ROOM - 22:30

  56.  

  57. Peter inserts an AI drawing titled: "Still Here..." to a draft on his laptop.


  58. PETER (V.O): I'm not where I was, but I'm not gone yet. That has to count for something.


  59. His WIFE presents a joyful birthday cake to Peter.


  60. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): While some measure life in years, I measure it by the languages I learn, the bays I swim, the screenplays I write, and the songs I compose.


  61. As KAJI, the family pet, joins them, Peter blows out the candles.

  62.  

  63. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): At 71, my body may weaken, but my heart still sings the same tune it learned at 17.


  64. FADE OUT


  65. END


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