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Swift Response

Writer's picture: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS

Updated: May 7, 2021

  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STUDY - MORNING

  4. PETER is reading and editing a draft in a computer.


  5. PETER (V.O.): The deadline for this task is tomorrow. I believe the secretariat is expecting it.


  6. Refining the draft.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Subject to their review on the format, I can finalize my decision in a few minutes.


  8. Saving a copy.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Perhaps, I can go to the beach later in the morning before returning my NT haven.


  10. Writing an email and attaching a file, Peter sends it.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Done!


  12. Peter looks happy.


  13. Act 2


  14. INT. STUDY - CONTINUOUS


  15. Relaxing on a sofa with his devices, Peter checks mails and sees a "Resend" with attachments.


  16. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Replying swiftly, a committee secretary attached the wrong files.


  17. Peter studies the texts on his phone screen.


  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Although the recipients are given weeks to reply, I'd better give a swift response so that I'll have fewer unfinished businesses.


  19. Having typed on his phone, Peter sees another message marked Urgent.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, the cases requesting for free legal advice have been delivered to my chambers.


  21. Then, he sees another message.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, a friend has just despatched me a complimentary concert ticket. Let me thank her notice first.


  23. Peter types his message and sends it.


  24. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Communications can be near instantaneous these days.


  25. Thinking.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've to return to my chambers today.


  27. Checking his mail inbox, Peter reads a mail.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The committee secretary has come back with a swift response. But he has overthought my comment.


  29. Peter then sees another mail.


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Knowing his subordinate has misread me, the supervisor has followed up with a swift response.


  31. Thinking.


  32. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me also reply to all to resolve the embarrassment swiftly.


  33. Having typed his reply on his phone, Peter looks upset.


  34. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But the formatting-review that I'm expecting to get hours earlier is still outstanding.


  35. Peter checks the time.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's already lunch time. Let me chase after that.


  37. EXT. MALL - LUNCH TIME


  38. Peter wanders from one restaurant to another.


  39. PETER (V.O.): I didn't mean to come here for lunch. I planned to have lunch in a lakeside restaurant.


  40. INT. STUDY - AFTERNOON


  41. Peter is having a phone conversation.


  42. PETER (To phone): Did you receive my mail and attachment this morning? I wish the format review can be done within today.


  43. Peter finishes the conversation.


  44. PETER (V.O.): Should I go swimming now? But the formatting review may arrive any time.


  45. Checking his mail inbox, Peter sees a webinar invitation reminder and joins it. We hear someone talking.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I just can't bear wasting time by waiting for the secretariat's response.


  47. EXT. MTR STATION - LATE AFTERNOON


  48. Checking his phone, Peter is waiting for the train.


  49. PETER (V.O.): It's already after 5.pm, the secretariat hasn't responded yet. That's very bad!


  50. A train swiftly arrives.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I believe human's responses can be as swift as machines.


  52. Act 3


  53. EXT. SWIMMING POOL - NIGHT


  54. Peter is swimming.


  55. PETER (V.O.): Today, I didn't expect I'd swim the night session here.


  56. Recalling.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Since I began working in my teens, I've been responding to people, and reacting to events and situations, swiftly.


  58. Pausing.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): What I have learned today is this: If I want swift response and immediate action, I've to aim ridiculously low.


  60. INT. STUDY - LATE NIGHT


  61. Peter checks his mail inbox.


  62. PETER (V.O.): Still no reply, breaking a promise too.


  63. Pausing.


  64. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I now take the view that it's better to be swift with the risk of making mistakes than to be nothing at all.


  65. FADE OUT.


  66. THE END



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