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The 9:50 Call

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Jul 1
  • 2 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 09:30


  4. Bedroom. Sunlight streams through the curtains. Birds singing. PETER brinks awake in bed.


  5. PETER (V.O.): I haven't had the experience for over 10 years.


  6. He takes a look of the bedside digital radio alarm clock with bright green display.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I slept like a baby.


  8. He checks the brand of the clock again.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's Sanyo - the proprietor meant to conquer three oceans.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can't remember when did I buy it.


  12. Peter then captures images of the clock with his phone. Seconds later, his phone rings. Caller ID: Estate Management.


  13. Act 2


  14. FLASHBACK


  15. INT. PETER URBAN HOME - NIGHT (Months ago)


  16. CALLER: Mr Cheung?


  17. PETER: Yes?


  18. CALLER: This is the security division of the management.


  19. PETER: What's the matter?


  20. CALLER: Just then, we saw the gate of your house left open.


  21. PETER: Oops! ... I don't stay overnight there...


  22. CALLER: Don't worry. We closed it for you.


  23. END FLASHBACK


  24. CALLER: Mr Cheung? 


  25. PETER: Yes?


  26. CALLER: This is the security division of the management. Have you lost your wallet?


  27. PETER (V.O.): Have I lost my wallet?


  28. Peter grabs his handbag and checks the contents inside.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, my wallet isn't here.


  30. PETER: Yes!


  31. CALLER: We've it here. We found it near your house gate. Please come to our office to collect it.


  32. PETER: Thank you so much!


  33. MONTAGE OF WHAT HAPPENED LAST NIGHT


  34. A. Peter's SMART City Coupe pulls up to the iron gate.


  35. B. Grabbing his handbag, Peter gets out to open the gate.


  36. C. Peter's wallet, a leather case, slips from the bag and lands silently on the road.


  37. D. Peter gets back in, parks inside, closes the gate. He never looks back.


  38. END MONTAGE


  39. Peter is about to leave his house. He stops.


  40. PETER (V.O.): My ID is in my wallet. I just can't walk into the management office and say I'm Peter.


  41. Then he sees an old Govt reception admission card with his photo and name on it.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): This is some proof.


  43. He heads to his SMART car. Then stops.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):The parking access card...it's in the wallet.


  45. Then, he looks at his fleet of old bicycles.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): All tires are flat.


  47. Peter is on his hands and knees, wrestling with a manual pump. He attaches the pump to the valve. He pumps. Once, twice, thrice...


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm sweating.


  49. Pausing.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Should have ...gotten...an electric...pump...


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. BEDROOM - 22:30


  53. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows a Sanyo digital alarm clock with bright green display reading 9:50 and a pair of black-framed glasses resting in front of it.


  54. PETER (V.O.): I was lucky. Didn't have to run around like a headless chicken. No time was wasted.


  55. Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Life gives me a warning shot before it gives me a crisis. The trick is to answer the 9:50 call.


  57. Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The 9:50 call tells me what I still have - a bicycle, a manual pump, and a morning worth living twice.


  59.  The END


  60. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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