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The Crow's Law

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 1 day ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 09:45


  4. Sitting up in bed, PETER scrolls Facebook. He pauses at a post in black, with just the phrase "The Crow's Law".


  5. PETER (V.O.): What is it?


  6. He surfs the web to investigate.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The Crow's Law states that when a bird is disliked by the forest for its harsh voice, it blames the trees. It flies from branch to branch, expecting a different reception, entirely deaf to its own voice.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Too cynical.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Why would one blame one's environment when the source of one's conflict is internal?


  12. Reading.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): To understand the Crow's Law, one has to look at the bitter intersection of human psychology and eg estate planning.


  14. Act 2


  15. INT. PETER'S TIN SUM HOME - 16:45


  16. Very cluttered. Peter, a BROTHER and a SISTER work together.


  17. PETER (V.O.): Our Dad died over 10 years ago. Our Mom now lives in an elderly home.


  18. They collect obvious trash.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In the early 1960s, they bought the land. Now our Mum is the sole owner.


  20.  They clear flat surfaces.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'll be the executor of her will. And I note that all her estate will be shared equally among her children.


  22. They focus on one zone.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My job will require no thought, no empathy and no context.


  24. Pausing.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): If my Mom opted for equity, which is justice, she might give to each according to his/ her unique circumstances, vulnerabilities and history.


  26. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 19:35


  27. Bathroom. Peter is having a shower.


  28. PETER (V.O.): Sharon and I bought our first home here in 1983. To travel to the urban area is still time-consuming.


  29. Bathing.


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In 1985, we bought our second home on Hong Kong island. With a MTR station nearby, we didn't have to drive to work.


  31. EXT. TOLO HIGHWAY - 20:15


  32. Peter is driving his 1989 red S13 at 100km/h.


  33. PETER (V.O.): In 1989, I remortgaged our second home to buy this coupe. Sharon drove it a few times.


  34. Driving.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In 1991, I got the idea to buy our third home on the Kowloon side, and that's where I'm heading to.


  36. Sighing.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Then came 1992. Sharon died of stomach cancer. She was only 36.


  38. Sighing.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Our only son was just two-year old. A toddler left completely motherless before he even had the vocabulary to understand what he had lost.


  40. Driving.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Later, when I wanted to rebuild my family, my Mum sat me down.


  42. FLASHBACK


  43. INT. PETER'S TIN SUM HOME - DAY (1993)


  44. Peter's MUM (63) looks at Peter (39) with the fierce, protective wisdom of her generation.


  45. MUM: Your property on Hong Kong island must be given entirely to the son. It belongs to his mother's legacy. It's his shield against a world where he starts with a broken heart.


  46. END FLASHBACK


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I agreed instantly. It was the only equitable verdict. It was justice.


  48. Driving into a tunnel.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But the Crow's Law predicts a harsh truth: the ones who operate in absolute entitlement don't recognise equity.


  50. Sighing.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): They don't see a tragedy. They only see an empty space where they believe their asset should be.


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. BEDROOM -22:15


  54. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows a crow acting like a fixed observer while everything else looks in motion.


  55.  PETER (V.O.): When one is blinded on what one didn't get, one becomes unable to recognize to the sacrifice made to one what one has.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A child given branches to sit on would complain that another bird's branch is higher. A child given wings doesn't care about the tree-s/he owns the sky.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The law of equality is simple arithmetic. The law of equity is a moral ledger. Justice demands that I look at what was lost, not just what is left.


  60. The END


  61. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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