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The Icebreaker

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Apr 30
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. BEDROOM - 04:30


  5. Dimly lit. PETER stirs awake, his face lined with worry.


  6. PETER (V.O.): My mind drags up the darkest question.


  7. Sitting up, Peter grabs his smartphone, taps DeepSeek and types his prompt. The screen responds with a structured answer.


  8. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Uncovering the matter is nearly impossible...


  9. Reading.


  10. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Replace my question with "Does it change anything?"


  11. Reading.


  12. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm reclaiming my life... When anxiety hits, do 10 pushups immediately?


  13.  Peter gets out of bed and immediately drops to the floor, powering through 20 push-ups.


  14. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And then I'd choose sleep rather than staying awake.


  15.  Act 2

  16.  

  17. INT. YUNG'S BISTRO - 12:30


  18. Elegant. Peter is enjoying lunch with his friend DORA.


  19. PETER: Thank you so much! You're the only friend who would host a birthday lunch for me, and I truly appreciate it.


  20. They chat animatedly, and it's clear from Peter's expression that the topic is very close to his heart.


  21. PETER (Cont'd): I've been seeking counselling from DeepSeek and I find its insights quite persuasive. It prompts me to consider how I'd respond if my son were in the same situation.


  22. DORA: But AI can't truly grasp the nuances of human relationships. Take the initiative to be the icebreaker yourself.


  23. PETER: But DeepSeek advised me not to empower the weapon of silence.


  24. Dora shakes her head sideways.


  25. DORA: To me, these issues are trivial; harmony is what truly matters.


  26. As Peter nods in agreement, Dora gestures towards the desserts.


  27. DORA (Cont'd): Take the desserts home to share them with your sweetheart.


  28. Doubt is evident on Peter's face.


  29. MONTAGE OF PETER'S SUBSEQUENT ACTIVITIES


  30. A. Chambers. Peter hands a cheque to a SECRETARY to settle the rent.


  31. B. Photo shop. A PHOTOGRAPHER captures a driver's licence photo of Peter.


  32. C. Licensing unit. Peter gets his new international driving licence.


  33. END MONTAGE


  34. INT. PUBLIC SWIMMING POOL - 17:15


  35. Peter swims thoughtfully.


  36. PETER (V.O.): How to break the ice after a month of silence?


  37. Pausing.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It was during a family dinner that I learned from my wife that she had hired a car for our scheduled trip in May. And I remarked that I needed to renew my international driving licence.


  39. EXT. ESTATE PARK - 18:15


  40. While walking through, Peter gets a series of WhatsApp images. He stops to read them, a mix of curiosity and anticipation evident in his expression.


  41.  PETER (V.O.): Oh, my wife's New Beetle is leaking oil, and she has already taken it to our car repair shop for a check-up.


  42. After typing "okay", Peter adds that he has already renewed his international driving licence.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I want to remind my wife to renew her international driving licence if she hasn't already done so.


  44. INT. LIVING ROOM - 19:00


  45. As his WIFE arrives home, Peter takes the initiative to break the ice.


  46. PETER: Did you give the car to Fat Boy?

  47.  

  48. WIFE: Yes.


  49. INT. DINING ROOM - 20:30


  50. Peter gestures toward the desserts on the table.


  51. PETER: Dora treated me to lunch and asked me to bring the desserts home to share with you.


  52. Later, Peter watches closely as his wife takes the desserts.


  53. PETER (V.O.): I might be returning to something I've been addicted to.


  54. Act 3

  55.  

  56. INT. BEDROOM - 21:30

  57.  

  58. Peter inserts an AI drawing titled: "The Icebreaker..." to a draft on his laptop.

  59.  

  60. PETER (V.O): In moments of uncertainty, asking the right questions can lead to unexpected clarity.


  61. Thinking.


  62. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Breaking the ice isn't just about starting a conversation; it's about opening our hearts.


  63. Reflecting.

  64.  

  65. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Every small gesture can be a step towards healing; it's the little things that matter the most.


  66. FADE OUT


  67. END



 
 
 

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