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The Ritual of Recovery

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 4 days ago
  • 3 min read

Updated: 3 days ago

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 7:45


  4. Early morning light, soft and greyish blue, seeps through the curtains. PETER lies on his back in bed, eyes open.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Hmm, I've slept very well.


  6. He begins to turn onto his side.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): For the past six days, I've been very careful, trying to avoid the ache in my lower back.


  8. He pauses half-way, and then completes the turn.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): No spike of pain?


  10. Sitting on the edge of the bed, Peter places his hands on his knees and pushes himself to his feet.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Provisional discharge granted.


  12. Peter stands by the bed, a faint, incredulous smile on his face.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The most profound healing often whispers. It's the absence of pain, the return of a forgotten motion, a full night's silent sleep.


  14. Act 2


  15. EXT. MTR CABIN - 8:45


  16. Peter sits on a priority seat, scrolling on his phone. He types: Back strain recovery time. He reads, his lips moving slightly.


  17. PETER (V.O.): Mild, moderate, severe. Limits my bending...mild-to-moderate category.


  18. Reading.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Recovery: at least a week. Depends on...physique. And therapy.


  20. Peter looks up, considering.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My daily swim. That's the therapy.


  22. INT. OFFICE - 13:00


  23. Quiet, orderly room. Peter watches a video clip intensely at a desktop, papers spread before him.


  24. PETER (V.O.): Okay, I've examined the crime scene.


  25. He closes a file, stretches his back again - a conscious, grateful movement - and stands.


  26. INT. SUSHIRO - 14:15


  27. Peter sits at a bar table, savouring a piece of toro.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A simple, perfect celebration.


  29. EXT. YUEN LONG SWIMMING POOL - 16:45


  30. The outdoor pool shimmers. Peter swims length after length with a steady economic breaststrokes freestyle and backstrokes.


  31. PETER (V.O.): This isn't exercise; it's restoration.


  32. Before he climbs up the pool, Peter does a few gentle undulating dophin kicks.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Recovery is measured in subtractions: one less ache, one less limitation, one less fear.


  34. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 18:15


  35. G/F. Peter sits upright on a sofa with a red Fender Stratocaster, its back plate off. He uses a small screwdriver to replace a 9-volt battery.


  36. PETER (V.O.): Passive pick ups use magnets and coils to generate a signal. This guitar has active pick-ups and needs a 9-volt battery to boost the signal. A weak battery makes the sound quieter, duller, and eventualluy distorted or cutting out entirely.


  37. Peter plugs it in, strums a clean chord. Nods, satisfied. He then moves to a digital Clavinova keyboard.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me play the jazz standard: Satin Doll.


  39. The swing rhythm is relaxed. Peter smiles. He then goes up to the 1/F and sits at an upright Yamaha piano.


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me play my favourite: A Summer Place.


  41. The tone is warm, nostalgic. But a stubborn key sticks on a final chord,


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Again?


  43. Peter fetches a bottle of baby powder, carefully dusts the offending key's sides, works it up and down. He then goes up to the 2/F, takes a drum seat and picks up the sticks.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I haven't played drums for decades.


  45. Peter executes a few drum rolls.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The ritual succeeds when it ceases to be just about mending a break, and becomes again about maintaining a life.


  47. EXT. BUS STOP - 19:00


  48. Sitting on a bench, Peter is focused on his phone. He quickly completes Duolingo lessons in Italian, Korean and Japanese. The bus arrives.


  49. Wearing a pair of closed-back headphones, Peter boards the bus.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Today, a series of deliberate, healing steps. When I'm home, I still have to do Portuguese, German...


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. BEDROOM - 22:00

  53.  

  54. Peter uploads a photo capturing a setting sun partially obscured by part of the Yuen Long Swimming Pool, creating a lens flare effect to a draft on his laptop.


  55. PETER (V.O.): The ritual begins with a truce: agreement to listen to the body instead of fighting it.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Patience isn't waiting passively, it's the active ingredient in every ritual of recovery.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The ritual of recovery is the gentle alignment of daily orbit around the sun of my own well-being.


  60. The END


  61. FADE OUT


 
 
 

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