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The Tuesday Man

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 1 day ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. LIVING ROOM - 11:45


  4. PETER sits on a sofa, completing his daily Duolingo streaks in seven languages. He checks his MyObservatory app.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Oh, the thunderstorm warning remains in effect until 3pm.


  6. Peter sits at the piano and begins to play his interpretion of the song: All Over the World.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm pleased I get the hooky intro riff right.


  8. EXT. ESTATE STREET - 14:25


  9. Peter walks towards a mall.


  10. PETER (V.O.): Contrary to my practice, I'll eat before I swim today.


  11. He takes a look of his right hand.


  12. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I did yard work so hard yesterday that I've developed a friction blister that has ruptured from the repetitive rubbing of the sickle handle.


  13.  Act 2


  14. INT. MANNINGS - CONTINUOUS


  15. Peter walks the aisles, his eyes scanning the shelves. He picks up a box of waterproof plasters, Price: HK$18.


  16. PETER (V.O.): I seldom shop items like this in Hong Kong. I visit Japan often and would buy in its 100 yen (HK$5) stores.


  17. His eyes drift to a display of dental flossers.


  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I ate in a nice Fo Shan restaurant a few days ago. I asked for toothpicks and I got dental flosseurs as well.


  19. He checks the price on small boxes and sees HK$10 each and a sign: Buy Two, Get 20% Discount.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Buy two then. It's strategy!


  21. Peter places the plasters and the two boxes of flossers on the counter. The CASHIER scans the items.


  22. CASHIER: That will be $38, sir.


  23. Peter pulls out his Octopus card, the "JoyYou" edition for senior citizens.


  24. CASHIER (Cont'd): Wait...You're using the "JoyYou" card, right?


  25. PETER: Yes...


  26. CASHIER: It's Tuesday, you get a 15% senior discount.


  27. Peter's eyes blink.


  28. PETER: Is that right?


  29. CASHIER: Yes, every Tuesday for senior citizens.


  30. The cashier taps a few keys. The reader displays a new total.


  31. CASHIER:$28.9 please.


  32. Peter taps his card happily.


  33. PETER: Thank you!


  34. CASHIER: Come again.


  35. The transaction is complete.


  36. PETER (V.O).: $28.9 for all this. Not bad by Hong Kong standard.


  37. He leaves the store, holding his purchase with his hands.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's a small, unexpected victory.


  39. INT. BEDROOM/LIVING ROOM - 20:45


  40. The TV is on. Peter opens a small box of dental flossers.


  41. PETER (V.O.): Dinner is done...The Mark Six...Draw after 9:15pm...


  42. Pausing.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): If I don't buy, I can't win.


  44. Pausing.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've won the third prize twice, in 2005 and in 2021...and I'm still losing. That tells me everything about hope and mathematics.


  46. He reaches for his phone. Ding! A WhatsApp message pops up.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, it's from a relative...I've been waiting for his reply for weeks...they're joining my grandchild's 100 days party!


  48. Peter exits to join his WIFE in the living room.


  49. PETER: The last party of five attending...we can finalize our guest list now...


  50. WIFE: Let me double-check with you the guest list...


  51. Later, Peter returns to the bedroom. It's already 9:45pm.


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. BEDROOM - 22:30


  54. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows the plasters and the dental flossers that he bought on Tuesday.


  55.  PETER (V.O.): Mondays are for beginnings. Fridays are for endings. But Tuesdays? Tuesdays are for the in-between. I've spent 72 years in the in-between. I don't always seek adventure.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The Tuesday man often seek the familiar- the same store, the same bay, the same lottery. Familiarity is a quiet conversation with time. Even the most ordinary Tuesday will tell me something I've never heard before. 


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):  I know that victories aren't measured by their size. They're measured by how much of my heart I invest in the attempt.


  60. The END


  61. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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