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The Wonder of Returning

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 5 hours ago
  • 2 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 20:30


  4. A warm soft lit room. Outside the window, the city hums faintly in a distance. PETER sits up in bed, checking his recent photos.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Last Thursday, I visited Qingyuan's Dontian Wonderland again. The first time was January 2026.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's the First Sinkhole in South China. It has a sky hole.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The cave was carved by water. Over million of years. Drip by drip. Drop by drop.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In January, I walked in through the path and came out by boat. Last Thursday, I took the boat first.


  12.  A smile plays on his lips.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Two visits, Same cave. Same travel agency. Different memories.


  14. Act 2


  15. FLASHBACK


  16. EXT. DONTIAN WONDERLAND - 12:30 (17 June 2026)


  17. Peter emerges from the cave and walks towards a group of stores.


  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I know my way.


  19. He stops at a modest corner store with a handwritten sign: Fresh White Bean Curd - Winter Honey - Local Specialties.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): This is it.


  21. He checks the rows of honey jars on the wooden table - deep amber, glowing in the afternoon light.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Same price.


  23. The PROPRIETOR approaches Peter.


  24. PETER: I bought a jar of winter honey in January this year.


  25. PROPRIETOR: Is that right?


  26. She tries to recognize Peter.


  27. PETER:  Every morning, I've a spoonful in warm water. I'm about to finish the jar.


  28. PROPRIETOR: So you came all the way back for more?


  29. PETER: I'm interested to know if you've honey better than the winter honey...


  30. PROPRIETOR: How about rock honey?


  31. The Proprietory pulls out her phone and shows Peter how rock honey is collected.


  32. PROPRIETOR: They're rare.


  33. PETER: Give me a discount. I buy two jars.


  34. Peter pays. And the proprietor points to the pudding pot.


  35. PROPRIETOR: Free bowl of bean curb pudding. On the house. My treat.


  36. Peter brinks.


  37. PROPRIETOR: You came back. That means my honey is good, yes?


  38. The proprietor serves Peter a generous bowl of pudding.


  39. PETER: Thank you.


  40. Peter eats. The proprietor watches him with a warm smile. She notices his bowl getting low. Then, she scoops another portion into his bowl, topping it up.


  41. PETER: Oh...


  42. Peter finishes the second helping.


  43. PETER (V.O.): She's so kind...


  44. PETER (Cont'd): I buy another big jar of winter honey.


  45. Peter pays.


  46. PETER (V.O.): I don't ask for discount this time.


  47. PROPRIETOR: I know the price of my honey isn't cheap.


  48. PETER: That should reflect the quality...


  49. The Proprietor carefully pack all the honey jars for Peter.


  50. PETER (V.O.): Quite heavy.


  51. RETURN TO PRESENT


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. BEDROOM - 22:00


  54. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows part of the Qingyuan's Dontian Wonderland.


  55. PETER (V.O.): I took the photo in Qingyuan last Thursday. A place changes me. Returning shows me how.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Wonder is not a place. It's a relationship. Kindness is the souvenir that never expires.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The wonder of returning is this: I leave with a souvenir, but I return with a story.


  60. The END


  61. FADE OUT


 
 
 

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