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To the Buoy and Back

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Aug 26
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. BEDROOM - 08:30


  5. PETER puts his goggles and a bottle of sunblock into a red bag,

  6.  

  7. PETER (V.O.): On my way back to my house in NT to continue tidying up, I'll take a detour to Golden Bay for a swim.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The nice estate swimming is just a short elevator ride away, but it has become unappealing to me.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In the pool, I feel confined, surrounded by concrete and tile. The water in summer is similar to an onsen.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Although swimming in the pool is safe, I prefer the sense of freedom that comes with being in the bay.


  14. Pausing.


  15. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And I love the ritual that refreshes my soul.


  16. Act 2


  17. EXT. GOLDEN BAY - 12:30


  18. Sunny, Wearing simple shorts, a T-shirt and carrying a bag, Peter walks towards the sand.


  19. PETER (V.O.): The beach is moderately busy.


  20. Peter finds his spot, a familiar patch of sand near a lifeguard tower. He strips down to his black and pink swimming trunks. He scans the swimming area.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):A lifeguard is rowing a raft near the floating barrier, but no swimmers are nearby,


  22. Peter steps into the water.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me swim towards him.


  24. Peter begins to swim.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The water is clear and cool. Great!


  26. A strong practised front crawl, He cuts through the water with quiet efficiency, heading straight for the boundary of the swimming area, marked by a line of orange buoys.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I don't swim to the buoy to prove I am not old; I swim to prove I am still alive.


  28. Upon reaching the floating barrier, Peter gribs an orange buoy tightly.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The greatest risk is not the water that carries me, but the shore that makes me forget how to swim.


  30. As he treads water, a tanned LIFEGUARD paddles by on a raft, and their eyes meet.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): An eye contact can hold a deeper gratitude than a thousand words should over the waves.


  32. A small smile touches Peter's lips.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I wouldn't know the lifeguard's name, but I trust him with my life. Some bonds need no introduction.


  34. Peter turns onto his back and floats, looking up at the vast sky.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm utterly at peace.


  36. Later, Peter flips over and begins to swim back to shore.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): From the buoy, the sunbathers on the shore looked like beach boats, forgetting the very thing they are made for.


  38. Peter swims freeastyle.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I wonder if they know the water isn't just for looking at, but for getting lost in.


  40. Peter does a few butterfly strokes. Later, he spots a group of KIDS building sandcastle near the water's edge.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was like that. Once.


  42. Peter walks up the beach.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Youth is building castles in the sand. Age is understanding why I must still swim out to sea.


  44. His eyes then sweep across the beach.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The sunbathers had settled in long before I arrived to swim.


  46. Peter's gaze liingers on them.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): They just lie there. Do they get the feeling of being suspended, weightless, far from the solid, predictable world?


  48. Pausing.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's wonderful out there.


  50. Peter walks back to his small pile of belongings,


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A little risk...makes one feel alive.


  52. Picking up his stiuff, Peter goes to the bathroom.


  53. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Time to tidy my house in NT again - the task is never-ending.


  54. Act 3


  55. INT. BEDROOM - 22:00

  56.  

  57. Peter uploads an image of Golden Bay, where calm waters marked by buoys and the beach is dotted with sunbathers, to a draft on his laptop.


  58. PETER (V.O.): I'm a creature of habit not because I fear change, but because I've found the few things worth repeating.


  59. Thinking.


  60. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The most important journey is the one I take every day, to the edge of myself and back.


  61. Reflecting.


  62. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): To the buoy and back: a simple act that contained the entire circle of life - departure, journey, boundary, and return.


  63. FADE OUT


  64. END

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