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What Would I've Become?

Writer's picture: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS
  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. SWIMMING POOL - DAY


  4. Peter is enjoying the powerful jacuzzi from the pool wall.


  5. PETER (V.O.): I'm still thinking about yesterday's encounter at the car repairer. The car repairer isn't inexpensive.


  6. FLASHBACK


  7. INT - CAR REPAIRER - DAY


  8. PETER waits at the counter watching his silver coupe, as the BOSS (30s) directs a MECHANIC (40s).


  9. BOSS: Change the rear left brake light bulb.


  10. Following the instructions quickly, the mechanic detaches the rear light panel of the silver coupe.


  11. PETER (V.O.): He does that carefully and neatly. I don't think I can do that well.


  12. In a cabinet nearby, the mechanic tries to find the right light bulb inside a drawer.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): No spare light bulb that would suit mine?


  14. The mechanic seeks help from the boss who selects the right one among 2 dozen types.


  15. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Good, I don't have to wait.


  16. Pausing.


  17. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But the mechanic's knowledge is limited.


  18. Pausing.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): If I began my car repairing apprenticeship in 1967, what would I've become?


  20. Act 2


  21. INT. CAR REPAIRER - CONTINUOUS


  22. Recalling.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In the 1960s, I liked to play with a neighbour-friend who was several years older than me.


  24. Recalling.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): His father raised the family as a car mechanic. After primary schooling, their sons became his apprentices.


  26. Recalling.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Life was generally hard. Learning a vocational skill like car-repairing was a way to earn a living.


  28. Recalling.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was 13 then. Due to the large-scale riots, my parents' factory jobs were uncertain.


  30. Recalling.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): As the eldest son of a 8-member family, it was thought that I should begin my apprenticeship, having done my 1st year in a secondary school already.


  32. Pausing.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My monthly school fee $32 was expensive to my family. I was the last one in the class to pay it.


  34. Recalling.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I felt so embarrassed, as the top student in class then.


  36. Recalling.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In the final exam, a classmate beat me and I only got the second position.


  38. Recalling.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The significance was that while the one who got first didn't have to pay school fees for the next year, I still had to pay half ie $16.


  40. Recalling.


  41. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Anyhow, the tangible benefit became the tipping point that I should continue my studies.


  42. Pausing.


  43. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): But I did whatever I could to earn a few dollars eg doing private tuition and selling labour in nearby factories.


  44. A CLERK (30s) returns to the counter to assist Peter.


  45. CLERK: Mr Cheung, is it OK to pay $3000 for the deposit for ordering your car's other spare parts from Japan?


  46. As he nods, Peter presents a smart bank card.


  47. BOSS: You drive the car home first. We'll get in touch with you in due course.


  48. EXT. ROAD - DAY


  49. Driving away from the repairer, Peter sees a POLICE CONSTABLE booking a car parking nearby. He gestures to the mechanic about what's happening.


  50. PETER (V.O.): Oh, he doesn't get it. He thinks I'm suggesting there's something wrong at the front of my car.


  51. Pausing.


  52. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): That's understandable. He's very customer-focus.


  53. Peter gestures again.


  54. PETER (V.O.): He's got it this time.


  55. Peter lowers the car's passenger window.


  56. MECHANIC: That car doesn't belong to our customers. Booking nearby has been pretty frequent these days.

  57. PETER: Thank you again.


  58. Peter drives off.


  59. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): The other reason why I didn't discontinue my studies then was that my Dad wanted me to become a Police Inspector.


  60. Recalling.


  61. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): When I became a bit short-sighted in 1969, my Dad was very cross with me as I wouldn't satisfy a basic requirement of the Police Inspector.


  62. Peter presses the accelerator.


  63. END FLASHBACK


  64. Act 3


  65. INT. SWIMMING POOL - DAY


  66. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): For a long time, I haven't bargained with the boss or his clerk. I just pay what they ask.


  67. Pausing.


  68. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The boss has created jobs for himself and at least three other staff.


  69. Pausing.


  70. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I contribute to their revenue streams. It's my own way of resource distribution.


  71. Pausing.


  72. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): If I became a car-repairing apprentice in 1967 with good eyesight, what would I've become? The boss or the mechanic?


  73. Adjusting his myopia -6.5 goggles, Peter does a few butterfly strokes.


  74. FADE OUT.


  75. THE END


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