Cards Story 2
- Peter Kam Fai Cheung SBS
- Nov 23, 2019
- 3 min read

FADE IN.
INT. SLEEPING ROOM - DAY
In bed, PETER is in thoughts as his WIFE is waking up.
PETER (V.O.)
Today is Saturday - day
2 of my follow-up actions.
Let me see what I can
do.
WIFE
You've already got your
driving licence yesterday,
right?
PETER
Yes.
WIFE
You can drive me to attend
a medical appointment.
PETER
No problem...Oh yes, I've
lost one of my car park
access cards and have
to reapply.
INT. ESTATE OFFICE - DAY
A STAFF (20s) is receiving Peter.
PETER
I've lost one of my car
park access cards and
want to get a new one.
STAFF
(Curious)
Access cards?
PETER
Yes. I own several parking
lots here. Let me show
you those cards that are
still with me. You can
check against the records
to help me find out which
one I've lost.
Peter shows the staff several photos of cards. The staff checks the records.
STAFF
I know which one you've
lost. Okay, $50. You can
have your new one before
the close of play today.
PETER
(Smiling)
Good! So efficient.
INT. CAR PARK - DAY
Approaching a numeric blue SMART car, Peter presses a remote control. No sound, no light.
PETER (V.O.)
Not unexpected. As
my little use of the car
has made the battery
dead.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.)
I've also lost the entry
card of my car park on
the Hong Kong side
too...
INT. STUDY - DAY
Holding a phone, Peter is speaking to someone.
PETER
(To phone)
So I must come in
person during your
office hours to apply
for a new card?
SOMEONE
(From phone)
Correct...
PETER (V.O.)
At least I know I can't
do it via the security
office outside office
hours.
INT. CAR PARK - DAY
Inside the SMART car, Peter connects the jump-starter cables with the battery terminals. Then he switches the key and we hear engine cranking sounds and then engine sounds.
PETER (V.O.)
Done! Let me go to
the car battery store
to buy a new battery
right away!
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Pedestrian crossing. Peter stops the car. ADULTS and KIDS are staring his car.
ADULT#1
What a beautiful car!
With a big smile, Peter waves at them as he drives away.
PETER (V.O.)
That's why I bought it
in 2003 and have been
keeping it. But I didn't
know it still looks good
after so many years!
EXT. CAR BATTERY STORE - DAY
A MECHANIC (64) is installing a new battery in the SMART car.
A beat.
MECHANIC
Done!
PETER
Thank you.
The mechanic than looks around the car.
MECHANIC
It looks like a new
car.
PETER (V.O.)
The new battery renews
its life!
INT. SECURITY OFFICE - DAY
Coming out with a new card in hand, Peter looks happy.
PETER (V.O.)
But I've got to check
if the codes are OK
and whether the ingress
and egress sequences
are in order.
INT. CAR PARK - NIGHT
As he stops the smart car at the gate, Peter swipes the car park entry card and presses a few keys on a gate device. We see the gate bar begins to lift up.
PETER (V.O.)
Great! The new card
works like the lost one.
Have made a U turn, Peter drives the car back to the car park.
After parking the car, Peter places the car park access card at the dash board and takes a photo.
PETER (V.O.)
Let my happy experience
be the contents of my
short-film screenplay
today. Yes, Cards Story 2.
Peter smiles.
FADE OUT. The End
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