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72 (And Still Learning)

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 20 hours ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. HK AIRPORT LOUNGE - 08:30 (May 15, 2026)


  4. Calm. Window overlooks tarmac. PETER and his WIFE sit by a table with dimsum.


  5. Peter picks up the phone and checks a WhatsApp message: Happy Birthday, Little brother.


  6. PETER (V.O.): It's from my thoughtful sister Lily.


  7. Peter smiles, types: Thank you Ka Jie. About to fly to Tokyo to see the younger daughter.


  8. He scrolls. Facebook. A wall of birthday wishes.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I must eat first. The plane won't wait.


  10. Soon, they finish their breakfast. Peter looks happy.

  11.  

  12. Act 2


  13. EXT. DAUGHTER'S APARTMENT, TOKYO - 20:00


  14. A modern styish building. Peter parks the rental car. His wife has the trunk open. They offload their luggage.


  15. PETER: Our daughter should be happy to get our supplies from Hong Kong.


  16. WIFE: Yes, I've steamed a carrot cake for her.


  17. PETER (V.O.): I've brought Japanese yen too.


  18. INT. YAKINIKU KING - 21:30


  19. Quiet and warm.


  20. DAUGHTER: We can order all we can eat.


  21. WIFE: Yes!


  22. PETER (V.O.): Yes, to celebrate this rare occasion.

  23.  

  24. Peter picks up his phone, extends his arm.


  25. PETER: Selfie. Now.


  26. They crowd together. Peter holds the phone high. Click.


  27. He immediately opens WhatsApp. The famiy group. He shares the selfie.


  28. Within seconds: hearts emojis.


  29. PETER (V.O.): So happy.


  30. Plates of meat and vegetables are served. Flames. They eat. They talk.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): This starts my good "birthday".

  32.  

  33. MONTAGE OF VARIOUS OCCASIONS (May 16 - 19, 2026)


  34. A. Mount Takao. Peter and his wife take the chairlifts and hike the winding trail.


  35. B. QB House, Hajioji. Peter sits in a barbar chair. The barbar buzzes his silver hair.


  36. C. Alleyways, Tachikawa. Peter, on a hotel bicycle, pedaling slowly through.


  37. D. Bikkuri Donkey, Fuchu. Peter and his wife dine with their daughter before parting.

  38.  

  39. E. Lake Kawaguchi. Peter and his wife stroll and take photos together with Mount Fuji in the background.


  40. END MONTAGE


  41. INT. NARITA AIRPORT - 17:30 (May 20, 2026)


  42. Departure. Peter and his wife shuffle through the gate, tired but content.


  43. Peter picks up his phone and scrolls WhatsApp messages, then stops.


  44. PETER (V.O.): Oh, Peter, the organist, and Andrew, the music critic, have passed away.


  45. Peter holds his phone like a dead phone.


  46. INT. FRITES BELGIUM ON TAP, QUARRY BAY - 13:20 (Today)


  47. A lively bistro. DORA hosts a lunch for Peter.


  48. PETER: You're my only friend who would host a birthday lunch for me...


  49. DORA: We're old friends - not literarally old, but we've been friends for a very long time.


  50. Then, the dessert arrives. A white plate is placed before Peter. On it sits a single cut of cake with a single lit birthday candle flickering. Around the edge of the plate, written in chocolate sauce: Happy Birthday, Peter.


  51. We see and hear a TEAM singing cheerfully: Happy Birthday to you...Peter looks overwhelmed.


  52. PETER (V.O.): Dora is so meticulous to arrange this for me.


  53. PETER: Thank you Dora. Thank you all. Appreciated.


  54. PETER (V..O.): But I don't take any birthday anniversaries for granted anymore. Not at 72.


  55. Act 3


  56. EXT. SILVERSTRAND BAY - 17:00


  57. The bay curves quietly. A small patch of sand away from the city. Peter lies flat on a floating platform, humming the tune: The Girl from Ipanema.


  58. PETER (V.O.): Birthday anniversaries are for cake. The hours after are for swimming and practising the piano.


  59. Thinking.


  60. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Before my "birthday" trip, I can play pretty well on piano the song: The Girl from Ipanema. But now, I've forgotten the bosa nova chords...72 (And Still Learning).


  61. Reflecting.


  62. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): At 72, the lessons are smaller but deeper. I know now that grief must be learned anew each time. Joy is a skill that rusts without use.


  63. The END


  64. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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