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A Second Helping

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Nov 12, 2023
  • 2 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 08:45


  4. Waking up, PETER sees KAJI, the family pet, staring at him.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Today's Saturday. The maid is on leave.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me buy takeaway breakfast for you first. Later in the morning, I'll go again to buy breakfast for the family.


  8. MONTAGE


  9. A. Peter runs to the mall, buys a piece of bread and runs home.


  10. B. After feeding Kaji at home, Peter stays in bed with his WIFE.


  11. END MONTAGE


  12. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I run as I want to exercise my body.


  13. Act 2


  14. INT. MALL - 11:15


  15. Fast food chain. Peter orders at the CASHIER.


  16. PETER: Three sets of breakfast: Satay beef noodles, barbecue chicken and oats porridge.


  17. Waiting.


  18. PETER (V.O.): My daughter wants a poached egg and a carrot cake too. She can have mine in my porridge set.


  19. Paying.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My wife loves the barbecue chicken here.


  21. Getting a chit.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me have a quick look of the music store nearby.


  23. Music store. Peter is window shopping.


  24. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The blue guitar I like has been sold. Second thoughts aren't better.


  25. Returning to the fast food chain, Peter goes to the take-away counter.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): No one is waiting.


  27. Seeing STAFF#1 has just finished packing a bag of food, Peter checks the chit number.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's mine.


  29. STAFF#2 nearby checks the food inside the bag. She then passes a bowl of porridge to Staff#1 to repack.

  30. .

  31. PETER (V.O.): Well, a large item was missing. I worry about the small items.


  32. PETER (to Staff#1): Have you packed the poached egg?


  33. STAFF#1: Yes.


  34. PETER: Thank you. I just want to save the trouble of returning.


  35. INT. DINING ROOM - 11:30


  36. Peter's DAUGHTER sets the table and places the food.

  37. DAUGHTER: Where's Mum's chicken dish? It isn't here!


  38. PETER: I'll go and get it!


  39. Peter takes out his smartphone and snaps a photo of the food they got.


  40. INT. MALL - 11: 40


  41. Peter runs to the fast food chain.


  42. PETER (V.O.): I just hope that it still has the chicken dish.


  43. Take-away counter. Peter shows the photo and a copy chit to Staff#1.


  44. PETER: The chicken dish is missing.


  45. Staff#1 is embarrassed.


  46. STAFF#1: So sorry. Please accept a complimentary drink as an apology.


  47. Soon Staff#1 packs the missing chicken dish and the complimentary drink and hands the bag to Peter.

  48. INT. LIFT LOBBY - 11:50


  49. Ringtones. Peter takes the call.


  50. WIFE (from phone): Has your set missed something? Just porridge for you?


  51. PETER: Yes...


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. STUDY - 23:00


  54. Peter works before a laptop.


  55. PETER (V.O.): Mistakes happen, specially in takeaway service.


  56. Instructing his assistant in All_The_Photos, Peter types on screen: ...communicating the message of "A Second Helping". We see an image appearing in seconds.


  57. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Too ambiguous for the bot to understand the second portion of food or the second chance given.


  58. Repeating his instructions on screen and seeing the images generated, Peter doesn't look pleased.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When rectifying mistakes, I empathize those making them, including this AI bot, as they have been helping me tirelessly.


  60. FADE OUT


  61. THE END



















































































 
 
 

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