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A Valid Lie

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Apr 6
  • 3 min read

Updated: Apr 8

  1. Act 1


  2. INT. LIVING ROOM - 16:30


  3. Modest. An upright piano dominates one corner. PETER stares at a WhatsApp message. Happy Easter...


  4. PETER (V.O.): A relative seeks help again.


  5. Reading.


  6. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Two jobs. Job one - easy. Job two - complex. Requires deep analysis, sound judgment, stress tolerance.


  7. Reading.


  8. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Ratings... Job one - effective. Job two - moderate.

  9.  

  10. Reading.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The relative did everything asked.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Is the assessment accurate? That's the problem.


  14. Act 2


  15. INT. LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS


  16. Peter goes to the piano. He plays and plays.


  17. PETER (V.O.): It appears the relative is not performing to the level required.


  18. Pausing.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): How can I help if that's factually correct?


  20. Peter continues playing.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The system is the system.


  22. A little while later, Peter's WIFE comes back, and Peter pauses midpiece.


  23. PETER: Darling, can I pick your brain about something? The same problem...


  24. WIFE: Hasn't that been resolved?


  25. PETER: The management comes back with something and our relative wants to reply.


  26. Peter recites some paras.


  27. PETER (Cont'd): ...both jobs are equally demanding...


  28. Pausing.


  29. PETER(Cont'd): That's a falsehood.


  30. WIFE: Wait a minute. You say the falsehood is that Job one and Job two are equally demanding.


  31. PETER: Correct.


  32. WIFE: And our relative performed effectively in Job one.


  33. PETER: Yes.


  34. WIFE: So if the jobs are equally demanding, then effectiveness in Job one should predict effectiveness in Job two.


  35. Peter freezes.


  36. PETER: That's... logically valid.


  37. WIFE: If Job one is easy and Job two is hard, then it makes sense someone could be effective at one and moderate at the other.


  38. PETER: Oh yes, the management has removed that explanation. And the falsehood can be deployed...


  39. WIFE: By the management's own standard, our relative possesses the competence for Job two. A moderate rating in Job two contradicts the management's premise.


  40. PETER: The only logical conclusion is the rating is not accurate.


  41. WIFE: If the jobs are equal, our relative's performance should be equal. If our relative's performance isn't equal, then the jobs aren't equal. So the management have to upgrade the rating.


  42. PETER: The management is boxed.


  43. Pausing.


  44. PETER (Cont'd): Initially, I dismissed the falsehood as irrelevant. But you see it as the key.


  45. Peter begins to type on his phone screen.


  46. PETER (Cont'd): Find the flaw in the premise. Then flip it.


  47. WIFE: It's not about the truth. It's about consistency.


  48. PETER: The management chooses to lie. They've to live with the consequences.


  49. Peter sends his message.


  50. PETER (Cont'd): You're brilliant.


  51. WIFE: You praise me for having cooked up a valid lie?


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. LIVING ROOM - 22:30


  54. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows a serene seascape with floating platforms appears peaceful, but the overcast sky reveals it's actually a valid lie of calm before an impending storm.


  55. PETER (V.O.): All my life, I believe the truth is a shield. That if I just lay out the facts, reason would follow. But reason doesn't care about facts. Reason cares about premises.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can't change a false premise. But I reckon now I can live inside it so skillfully that the other person begs to leave.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Now, I can take a lie seriously. And when I'm done, the logic is airtight and the trap has no exit. A lie is a cage. Consistency is for winners. Truth is for philosophers.


  60. The END


  61. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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