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Appropriately Small

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Oct 18
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 07:45


  4. Sunlight streams through sheer curtains, casting a warm glow across the room. PETER lies in bed, cocooned in a small turtle comforter.


  5.  PETER (V.O.): Having completed my commitment yesterday, I moved on to the next task: inviting Chong to lunch.  I was delighted that he could make it today.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): However, I've an on-going professional task...


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But a lawyer's job is never done...work can wait.


  10. As a smile spreads across Peter's face, he grabs his smartphone.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): First, complete my Duolingo streaks; second, enjoy lunch; and third, go swimming.


  12. Act 2


  13. INT. STICKS & FIRE, FORTRESS HILL - 12:15


  14. Small, modern and stylish. At a corner table, Peter sips from a small bowl of soup.


  15. PETER (V.O.): I haven't placed my order yet, but I was served complementary soup while I wait for Chong.


  16. Checking a phone notification, Peter quickly responds.

  17.  

  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've just accepted another brief on human rights.


  19. When CHONG (60s) joins Peter, they both order the same main course and drinks.


  20. CHONG: We've so much in common. What do you intend to do after lunch?


  21. PETER: I'd go swimming in a bay accessible by any nearby bus.


  22. CHONG: Let's go together; I'll drive.


  23. Chong opens the MyObservatory app on his smartphone.


  24. CHONG (Cont'd): Based on the wind direction, we'll go to St. Stephen's Bay, as it's sheltered from the wind.

  25.  

  26. EXT. ROADS TO ST. STEPHEN'S BAY - 14:30


  27. Chong's silent EV glides through the streets of Hong Kong. Peter looks out of the window, the cityscape blurring into green coastline.


  28. PETER: No engine noise.


  29. CHONG: Just...forward motion.


  30. PETER: A very comfortable big EV.


  31. EXT. ST. STEPHEN'S BAY - 15:00


  32. A secluded, beautiful cove. No crowds. Peter and Chong are wading into the clear water.


  33. PETER (V.O.): Oh, that's fantastic; and I feel appropriately small.


  34. They swim for a while in comfortable silence.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I see the universe in its proper scale, and find my rightful, peaceful place within it.


  36. Peter strolls along the beach with Chong.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The frantic hustle is a spell to make I feel bigger. The quiet observation of the bay is the spell to make I feel appropriately small, and infinitely more real.


  38. EXT. CAR PARK, ST. STEPHEN'S BAY - 15:15


  39. Peter and Chong head back to the EV. A luxury car blocks their exit.


  40. PETER: Adjacent to the road is the campus of St. Stephen's College Preparatory School. The parents drive here to collect their children.

  41.  

  42. Chong drives very carefully as a long line of luxury cars wait by the side of the road.


  43. PETER (Cont'd): I was one of them, For years.


  44. Chong glances at Peter.


  45. PETER (Cont'd): My elder son boarded here from P.1. It's a very good school.


  46. They inch forward.


  47. PETER (Cont'd): All that tradition, the history...it lit a fire under him. It helped develop his potential, his quality.


  48. PETER (V.O.): And now, he's a very smart lawyer.


  49. A car approaches, comes to a stop, and then begins to reverse.


  50. CHONG: We can't squeeze through, and another car is following right behind us.


  51. PETER (V.O.): The goal of modern life is to feel big - through screens, status, and noise. The goal of wisdom is to feel appropriately small - through nature, silence and awe.


  52. Their EV finally breaks free of the congestion.


  53. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): An appropriately small life isn't a life of little ambition, but one of immense perspective, where ambition serves meaning, not the other way around.


  54. Act 3


  55. INT. BEDROOM -21:45


  56. Peter uploads an image, depicting the tranquil St. Stephen's Bay to a draft on his laptop.


  57. PETER (V.O.): Parenting is the long loving lesson in becoming appropriately small in my children's world, so they can grow large in their own.


  58. Thinking.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A great legacy isn't monument that makes others feel small, but a foundation that allows them to stand tall, having long forgotten the hand that laid the stone.


  60. Reflecting.


  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The wisdom of age is the understanding that I was never the lead character in the world's history, but I had the profound privilege of being a crucial one in a few.


  62.  FADE OUT


  63. END

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