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Atomic Happiness

Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
Peter K F Cheung SBS
May 26
3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM 02:00


  4. PETER, with tired eyes, publishes a screenplay.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Hours ago, my family celebrated my one-month old grandchild with a dinner that filled the room with love.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Although it's already 2am, I've done my daily screenplay. It features Kaji, the family pet, on Sundays, I have been doing that since 2017.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): To me discipline isn't about perfection - it's about showing up.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Small achievements matter. Stack them day by day, they quietly turn into a life.


  12. Act 2


  13. FLASHBACK


  14. INT. RESTAURANT, CRICKET CLUB - 21:15 (The night before)

  15. .

  16. A lively celebration dinner. The table is half-eaten. Peter watches his DAUGHTER - IN - LAW,


  17.  She holds a glass bottle of expressed milk. She tips it gently into the BABY's tiny mouth.


  18. The baby sucks. Her eyes half-closed, lost in the rhythm of feeding.


  19. Soon, Peter's SON reaches over, places his palm flat against the baby's small back. Pat. Pat. Pat. The baby swallows.


  20. FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  21. INT. PETER'S HK HOME - NIGHT (Spring 1989)


  22. Peter (34) enters and sees SHARON (33) who looks very worried.


  23. SHARON: I'm pregnant.


  24. She shows a pregnancy test report to Peter.


  25. SHARON: What should we do? You don't want any children.


  26. Sharon looks at Peter. He looks lost.


  27. PETER (V.O.): Life is hard. Why bring a child into suffering?


  28. PETER: It was an accident... when we stayed in our NT home over the weekend...


  29. Peter takes her hands. A long, slow breath.


  30. PETER (Cont'd): Since we started our intimate relationship, it's the only accident.


  31. SHARON: But it happened.


  32. PETER: Maybe that's fate. Our child is so determined to join us into this world.


  33. Nodding.


  34. PETER (Cont'd): We'll have our child, and we'll raise them together.


  35. EXT. ROADS - DAY (1 Jan 1990)

  36.  

  37. In their red Nissan 200SX, Peter drives with a smile. Sharon is at ease in the passenger seat. In a basket in the back row, their nearborn SON rests.


  38. PETER (V.O.): Now that I'm a father, I realize how wrong I was to spend all those years defending my choice not to have chidren.


  39. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - DAY ( Early August,1992)


  40. Sharon (36) looks very sick. Peter (37) turns to her.


  41. PETER: Darling, is there anything I can do for you?


  42. SHARON: No...my regret is that I wouldn't live long enough to know what our son would become.


  43. Peter looks helpless.


  44. SHARON: But I believe you're a good father.


  45. END FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Our son has become a lawyer and he's married a doctor.


  47. Pausing.


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): As a fact of physics, matter can't be destroyed, only re-arranged. Every atom in my body once belonged to something else.


  49. Pausing.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Sharon, you're here. In every atom. In our grandchild. I'm not just happy. We're happy together.


  51. Peter steps forward to hold their grandchild with love.


  52. RETURN TO PRESENT


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. BEDROOM - 22:30


  55. Peter uploads an image of a present to a draft on his laptop. It shows a 1-gram gold bar - a tiny, bright piece of real value - resting on rough, gray everyday-looking surface.


  56. PETER (V.O.): Something small can still be significant, and it can stand out clearly even in an environment that feels dull. That's the spirit of atomic happiness.


  57. Thinking.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Atomic happiness is finding what's bright, and stacking it day by day. Small wins don't look dramatic until they turn into a life.


  59. Reflecting.


  60. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I hold my grandchild, I'm not alone. Sharon is in the warmth of that small hand. That's physics. Not metaphor.


  61. The END


  62. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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