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Dear Judge

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Oct 29, 2020
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. MTR TRAIN - DAY


  4. Crowded. PETER in suit is checking phone notifications.


  5. PETER: (V.O.): Having spent a whole day before a judge, now is time to entertain some of my Quora fans.


  6. Peter reads an answer request: "If a lady says 'thanks dear', does it actually show more affection when she just says "thanks"?


  7. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): Chinese just say "thanks" or "many thanks". They mean what they say.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): If they don't mean what they say, they don't say it...


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): But some in the grassroot service sector may address every potential customer as a "handsome man" or a "pretty woman".


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): But they won't say "thanks dear" though.


  14. Act 2


  15. EXT. MTR TRAIN - CONTINUOUS


  16. Pausing.


  17. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): Some sales ladies in the English-speaking world did say "thanks dear" to me. Did they show more affection?


  18. Pausing.


  19. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): Yes, for a second, knowing full well it's just a standard customer relationship gimmick.


  20. Pausing.


  21. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): The practice is not unlike the standard formula in English letter writing.


  22. PETER (V.O.): We address "Dear Sir/Madam" to someone we don't even know.


  23. Pausing.


  24. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): How can an unknown person be dear to someone?


  25. Pausing.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Thus, I hate the untruthful salutation. I use "Hi", unless the letter is a formal one.


  27. Pausing.


  28. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me find a photo of a letter and use it as a feature photo in my reply.


  29. Peter searches "letter" in his phone App. Several letter images appear. He checks them.


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, I've taken a photo of my handwritten letter to a judge.


  31. We see on the screen: Dear Judge...Peter continues to read it.


  32. FLASHBACK


  33. INT. HOME, N.T. - DAY (JUL 1992)


  34. Peter (38) is reading a letter.


  35. PETER (V.O.): Judge Nazareth is so kind, supporting me while my wife and I are having the most difficult time. I've to thank him.


  36. END FLASHBACK


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): That triggered my reply to the Judge's letter.


  38. Pausing.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I saluted "Dear Judge", I meant it.


  40. Recalling.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I worked with the Judge from 1988 to 1991. That was the time when I'd dare use the Judges' lift to visit his chambers.


  42. Pausing.


  43. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was the joint secretary to the Copyright Law Reform Committee and he was the Chair.


  44. Pausing.


  45. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): He helped draft the Sino-British Joint Declaration. He retired as a Non-permanent Judge of Hong Kong's Court of Final Appeal.


  46. Sighing.


  47. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): He passed away in 2018 at the age of 86.


  48. Sighing again.


  49. PETER: (V.O.) (Cont'd): He was born in the same year as my late Dad, who passed away in 2011.


  50. Act 3


  51. EXT. MTR TRAIN - CONTINUOUS


  52. Having typed his reply on the phone, Peter is in thoughts again.


  53. PETER (V.O.): I've to do an appeal hearing soon. "May it please the court" is an obligatory phrase at the outset of an oral argument.


  54. Pausing.


  55. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's just another formalism. Although it's quite pointless, it's still a good way to start.


  56. Pausing.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): There isn't any formal complimentary close though.


  58. Pausing.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Again, in letter writing, we end a letter to an unknown person with "Yours faithfully". How can one be faithful to someone unknown?


  60. Pausing.


  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): "Thanks dear" is just another formula, not really affectionate at all.


  62. Pausing.


  63. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Dear me! A pointless answer request would trigger my feelings to people who were really dear to me.


  64. Peter looks lost in the crowd.


  65. FADE OUT.


  66. THE END


 
 
 

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