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Family Milestones

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Aug 20, 2024
  • 2 min read

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 21:45


  4. Sitting by the bedside, PETER is working on a laptop.


  5. PETER (V.O): My wife and I have just had dinner with our younger daughter at home.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Tomorrow, she'll return to Niigata to continue her artistic pursuit.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): We'll meet again in our elder daughter's wedding reception in Busan next March.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Until then, we'll get connected in our usual electronic ways.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): During her short stay, we didn't even have time to let her practise driving.


  14. Act 2


  15. FLASHBACK


  16. EXT. STREETS - 11:15


  17. In a Previa, Peter is driving, with his WIFE sitting in the passenger seat. Their younger DAUGHTER is sitting in the middle row.


  18. PETER (V.O): We got this car a fortnight after welcoming our younger daughter home.


  19. Having glanced his wife, Peter talks to her.


  20. PETER: Darling, do you remember what today is?


  21. WIFE: Hmm, let me see...


  22. PETER (Cont'd): Today 26 years ago, you gave birth to our son...


  23. WIFE: Oh yes!


  24. PETER: You chose to deliver him via Caesarean section...

  25. WIFE: Yes...in the morning...


  26. PETER: And now, he's a junior doctor working in Sydney.


  27. WIFE: Yes, we're all very proud of him.


  28. MONTAGE ABOUT THE SON


  29. A. Domestic gathering, SON (10) performs magic before RELATIVES.


  30. B. Theatre. In a "Romeo & Juliet" show, son (11) kicks ballet before SPECTATORS.

  31. C. Gallery. Peter and his WIFE admire an artwork with their son's name on it.


  32. D. Sports centre. Son and his SISTERS practise Taekwondo.


  33. E. Home. Son (16) plays the piano.


  34. END MONTAGE


  35. PETER (V.O.): In his secondary school years, he was brilliant in Arts but he chose to study Science.


  36. Pausing.


  37. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): I was quite worried as he was the first in the Cheung family to do that.


  38. Recalling.


  39. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Despite initial challenges, he got his degrees in Medicine with distinction or 1st class honours.


  40. Smiling.


  41. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): And his dearest and nearest is his girlfriend who is his junior and is determined to become a surgeon.


  42. PETER: When you're about to deliver our younger daughter two years later, again via Caesarean section, we had a very tender moment.


  43. We see their younger daughter listening attentively.


  44. WIFE: You remember that?


  45. PETER: Yes, very much so...


  46. WIFE: As if I was saying goodbye to you...


  47. PETER: There's potential risk in every surgical operation...


  48. WIFE: Yes, apart from the delivery, I had to have my tubes tied too...


  49. PETER (V.O): I still miss Nana, our son's pet turtle...she experienced complications while laying a big egg and had to be euthanized to end its suffering.


  50. RETURN TO PRESENT


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS


  53. Peter inserts an AI drawing entitled "Family Milestones..." to a draft.


  54. PETER (V.O): My family is spread out, but we remain close and supportive of each other.


  55. Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): My wife is the backbone of the family and the one who has made it all possible.


  57. Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): I appreciate her contribution and am very grateful to her for rebuilding my family seamlessly.


  59. FADE OUT


  60. THE END

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