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Headphones On The Train

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 11 minutes ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. LIVING ROOM - 08:45


  4. A rattling, half-lit morning. The windows breathe with condensation. Rain tracks down the pane in uneven lines. PETER sits on a sofa, scrolling through FB on his phone. His thumb stops.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Ten Forgotten 60s Songs Only Real 60s Kids Remember!


  6. He taps the link. The first song appears: A Lover's Concerto - The Toys


  7. PETER (V.O.): I remember this. But the MV is one I've never seen.


  8. He watches. His expression one of mild curiosity. Another video plays. Kind of a Drag - The Buckinghams. Then, A Little Bit of Soul - the Music Explosion.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): They sound familiar.


  10. Other clips follow. I'm Telling You Now - Fredie and the Dreamers. Dissy - Tommy Roe. Judy in Disguise - John Fred and his Playboy Band. Tracy - The Cuff Links. Gimme Gimme Good Loving - Crazy Elephant. Get Together - the Young Bloods, Build Me Up Buttercup - The Foundations.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I remember all these.


  12. Peter leans back. He closes his eyes, the memory is vivid.


  13. Act 2


  14. FLASHBACK


  15. EXT. X'MAS VARIETY SHOW, SHUNG TAK COLLEGE - DAY (1970)


  16. The show ends. Peter (16) and his BANDMATES pack up.


  17. PETER (V.O.): This is the end of it.


  18. He looks down at a guitar and rests his hand on the strings.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can't be a rockstar. It's a fantasy,


  20. Pausing.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My public exams are less than six months away...


  22. He nods.


  23. INT. MASTER BED ROOM, PETER'S NT HOME - NIGHT (1986)


  24. The bedside radio. The dial is tuned. A warm, smooth voice of Uncle Ray fills the room. Peter (32) lies in bed, listening.


  25. PETER (V.O.): I won the Foreign Office scholarship, and I'm furthering my legal studies in UK soon.


  26. We hear songs of the 60s from the radio.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Apart from Sharon, I'd miss this radio programme. Uncle Ray is the only one who plays the music I loved.


  28. INT. ROYAL ALBERT HALL - NIGHT (Late 1986)


  29. Not full. Peter watches the HOLLIES performing live.


  30. PETER (V.O.): The first time I watch one of my most favourite British bands of the 60s performing live.


  31. EXT. WALES - DAY (Easter, 1987)


  32. Peter and SHARON (32) are motoring. The car's cassette player is on. We hear songs of the 60s.


  33. PETER (V.O.): In our last X'mas motoring, we just focused on the sights.


  34. RETURN TO PRESENT


  35. INT. MTR TRAIN - 18:45


  36. Peter sits on a priority seat. Faint and tinny sounds of songs of the 60s escape from his headphones.


  37. PETER (V.O.): Years ago, I found the Hong Kong internet radio "Apple-Fm". All the old songs. All the time.


  38. Listening.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): So now, I take the train. I take the coach on holiday. And I plug in.


  40. Listening.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I didn't become a rockstar. I became a lawyer. I wear a suit. I raise a family. I am a good man.


  42. He closes his eyes as the music swells his ears.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I have these headphones on, I'm 16 again. I don't mind I chose the life I did.


  44. Listening.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The music is always there. It's the only thing that doesn't have to change.


  46. Peter gets off to change to another crowded train.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Uncle Ray retired at the age of 96, on my birthday anniversary in 2021. He died on 13 Jan, 2023.


  48. Standing. Peter holds tight.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Peter King, who succeeded Uncle Ray's programme format, died in 2024.


  50. No seated PASSENGERS, including the young ONES on priority seats, would give Peter a seat.


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. BEDROOM - 22:00


  53. Peter uploads an image to a set of headphones to a draft on his laptop.


  54. PETER (V.O.): The train moves me forward through the city. But headphones on the train move me backward through the years. I arrive at my stop twice - once in body, once in memory.


  55. Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The tracks rattle, the annoucements blare, the passengers scroll and swipe. But with headphones on the train, I hear the same tambourine shake that I heard when I was 16.


  57. Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Seventy-two years on this Earth. Forty thousand commutes. One pair of headphones. And a thousand songs that never forget me, even when I almost forget myself.


  59.  The END


  60. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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