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Melody's Elusive Echo

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Oct 29, 2023
  • 2 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STUDIO - 20:00


  4. Returning, PETER hits a few piano keys.


  5. PETER (V.O.): It's the melody of the song "Flying me to the Moon", not "La Vie en Rose".


  6. Playing.


  7. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): No, I can't recall the melody.


  8. Grabbing his smartphone, Peter searches "La Vie en Rose" on YouTube and video clips appear.


  9. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I still can't recall the melody.


  10. As Peter plays one of the video clips, we hear the melody of "La Vie en Rose".


  11. Peter plays the melody on piano.


  12. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I must pay closer attention to the melody as my memory may be decaying.


  13. Act 2


  14. FLASHBACK


  15. INT. SITTING ROOM - 15:30 (Today)


  16. Peter is watching YouTube.


  17. PETER (V.O.): I think I've watched this video clip before.


  18. Watching.


  19. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Never mind, I can't remember any details.


  20. We see an image on screen singing a French song with emotion.


  21. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Her voice flows like a river, navigating the melodic twists and turns.


  22. Pausing.


  23. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): What's the title of the song?


  24. Recalling.


  25. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I've forgotten about it, again!


  26. Recalling.


  27. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): To reinforce my memory of the song's title, I remember I wrote a blog post with the song's title.


  28. We follow Peter to visit his website to read the titles of his posts. Then we focus on one entitled "La Vie en Rose".


  29. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): That's it!


  30. Thinking.


  31. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): To reinforce my memory, let me learn how to play "La Vie en Rose" on piano.


  32. After hitting some piano keys, Peter mines the sheet music of the song on screen.


  33. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): That's a lot better.


  34. Having played the melody of the song, Peter plays the chords as well.


  35. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): It isn't hard to learn.


  36. Peter continues to practise tirelessly.


  37. EXT. RIVERSIDE PARK - 19:00


  38. As Peter and his WIFE walk KAJI, the family pet, we hear Peter humming the melody of "La Vie en Rose".


  39. PETER (V.O.): Its verses and chorus aren't predictable.


  40. Thinking.


  41. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): That's why I find the song special as its melody isn't easy to grasp.


  42. EXT. SEASIDE PARK - 19:30


  43. Raining. Having stayed there for a while, Peter, his wife and Kaji exit.


  44. PETER (V.O.): Oh, I've forgotten the melody of "La Vie en Rose".


  45. RETURN TO PRESENT


  46. INT. SITTING ROOM - 21:15


  47. Peter and his wife are watching TV.


  48. WIFE: This scene was shot in 2018, about a year before the composer's natural death.


  49. PETER: He looked perfectly okay then...


  50. PETER (V.O.): OMG, I've forgotten the melody of "La Vie en Rose" again!


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. STUDIO - 22:30


  53. Working before his laptop, Peter is in deep thoughts.


  54. PETER (V.O.): Human memory is complex and unpredictable. Melody is particularly difficult to recall.


  55. Typing natural language in his smartphone, Peter instructs his 文心一言 assistant.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): See if she can depict "Melody's Elusive Echo".

  57. Repeating his prompts many times, Peter selects an impressionistic AI drawing.

  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): While I feel the melody's echo lingering in my mind, I've no clear idea when I can actively retrieve it.


  59. FADE OUT


  60. THE END

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