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Memories Soaked in Rain

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Aug 12
  • 3 min read

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    FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. BEDROOM - 04:00

  5.   

  6. Dimly lit by a single lamp. PETER and his WIFE sit up in bed side by side with mobiles in their hands.


  7. PETER: To see the World Expo, we're flying out to Osaka on Sept 7, returning on Sept 11, right?

  8.  

  9. WIFE: Yes, we've to use the complimentary tickets before Oct. I haven't made any hotel reservations yet.


  10. PETER: Yes, we've just done our 16-day July-August trip primarily to Niigata, Japan. Let me check where is the World Expo venue...We've amazing experiences at Expos before.


  11. WIFE: Aichi 2005, Shanghai 2010, Milan 2015...Those hot and dry visits are such fond memories.


  12. PETER: Time flies when we're having fun. Let's finalize our plan now...I get good rates from our favourite Dormy Inn chain.


  13. WIFE: We love the onsen facilities offered by the chain...In July, we stayed at the luxurious La Vista at Kusatsu Hills, and then in August, the value-for-money Dormy Inn Akihabara.


  14. PETER: Darling, we stayed at Dormy Inn Premium Namba before; should we revisit those fond memories?


  15. WIFE: Yes... and check the 30-day weather forecast...


  16. PETER: On Sept 8, it'll rain in both Osaka and Hong Kong...


  17. Act 2


  18. INT. LIVING ROOM - 12:30


  19. Sitting in a massage chair, Peter picks up his mobile and opens WhatsApp.


  20. PETER (V.O.): Oh the Duty Lawyer secretariat asks if I'm in Hong Kong and can take up a new case...and there's also a civil brief awaiting my response.


  21. Having checked his diary, Peter types his response and then makes a call.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've accepted both assignments. Being self-employed as a barrister has its perks.


  23. Recalling.


  24. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I was a senior civil servant, it was alll about work, and I rarely took holidays.


  25. Pausing.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):Hmm, I need to return to my NT home to search for a document related to a big family matter, especially with my new assignments coming up.


  27. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 15:30


  28. Bedroom. Peter heads towards a brief case placed near the window. He opens it. Inside are soaked documents, their edge curling.


  29. PETER (V.O.): OMG...


  30. FLASHBACK


  31. INT. HONG KONG AIRPORT - 13:30 (7 Aug, 2025)


  32. As Peter and his wife are pushing their luggage through the hallway, he sends a WhatsApp message to the family chat group: Back in Hong Kong. Almost instantly, he receives a reply: First sunny day in weeks!


  33. PETER (V.O.): Yes, we've been keeping up with the news from Hong Kong.


  34. Pausing.

  35.  

  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I need to return to my NT home tomorrow to check its conditions after the relentless rainstorms.


  37. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 17: 00 (8 Aug, 2025)


  38. Peter inspects the rooms.


  39. PETER (V.O.): Everything seems fine.


  40. Peter then spots a bedroom curtain fluttering in the wind.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, I've forgotten to close the window.


  42. RETURN TO PRESENT


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The rain had soaked the interior, although the wetness had dried by the time I arrived.


  44. Staring at the soaked documents.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The supporting documents that secured my barrister status weren't so fortunate.


  46. Front garden. Peter lays the documents on a patch of grass, trying to dry them out.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Come on, dry out for me!


  48. Later, Peter is cleaning the house, humming a tune. He inadvertently dips his mobile into a bucket of water while wiping the counter.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): No, no, no!


  50. Peter quickly pulls the mobile out, water dripping from it. He fumbles with it, trying to shake off the excess water.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): OMG, the water has seeped through the lens.


  52. Peter stares at the foggy lens.


  53. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): What a day...great, just great.


  54. Peter looks defeated.


  55. Act 3


  56. INT. BEDROOM - 22:30

  57.  

  58. Peter uploads an image of documents on a patch of grass to a draft on his laptop.


  59. PETER (V.O.): Memories soaked in rain are like flowers in a storm - resilient, beautiful, and forever changed.


  60. Thinking.


  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Rain may blur the past, but it also sharpens the colours of my memories.


  62. Reflecting.


  63. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Just as rain nourishes the earth, my memories, even when dampened, cultivate my soul.


  64. FADE OUT


  65. END

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