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More Alive

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Jan 8, 2022
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. SITTING ROOM - LATE MORNING


  4. Smartphone in hand, PETER is reading an answer request from a Quoran.


  5. PETER (V.O.): How to figure out one's goals in life?


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): An unexamined life isn't worth living. Just think deep why we're here.


  8. Peter types on the screen.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My wife and I will join a gathering for the first time.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): For decades, my wife focused on taking care of her Mum who passed away last year.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Now, she can refocus, and me too.

  14. Act 2


  15. SEQUENCE OF PETER'S GATHERING EXPERIENCE


  16. A. 15.15. Estate exit. Peter and his wife arrive in their 8-seater car to pick up a MOTHER (92) and a FATHER (91), who are being assisted by SON#1 and SON#2.


  17. B. 15: 45. Hotel restaurant. They sit in a table for six. The other three tables of six are occupied by other RELATIVES.


  18. C. 15:50. Having settled down, Peter and his wife begin to chat with relatives.

  19. D. 16:15. Banquet begins. Peter's wife and Son#1 sitting close to Mother and Father help them cut food into small bits.


  20. E. 17:15. Near the glass panel, Peter and BOY#1(6) and BOY#2 (4) interact energetically.


  21. F. 17: 45. Steamed Peach-shaped Buns and other desserts are being served.

  22. G.18:00. Politely monitored by STAFF, all guests rise to leave.

  23. H. 1815. Hotel lobby. STAFF#1 takes a few group photos for the party.


  24. END SEQUENCE


  25. EXT. STREETS OF TSUEN WAN - 19:15


  26. Peter is driving. His wife acts as the navigator.


  27. PETER: Oh, I recognise this street! When I was working in a dyeing factory nearby in 1971, I came here for lunch.


  28. Peter makes a turn.


  29. PETER (Cont'd): When I first worked as Housing Assistant in 1974, I came here to take mini-bus to go up to Kwai Shing Estate.


  30. Peter makes another turn.


  31. PETER(Cont'd): Can you see the plaza? We had many late dinners in a restaurant up there in 1993.


  32. Peter stops at a traffic jam.


  33. PETER(Cont'd): There're so many cars here now. I used to wait you here without causing any inconvenience to other road users.


  34. Peter's wife nods.


  35. PETER (V.O.): When I played with the boys at the banquet, they called me "Gong Gong".


  36. Recalling.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Later, they called me "Uncle". I believe they're corrected by their Mom.


  38. Pausing.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Weeks ago, a kid also addressed me as "Gong Gong."


  40. Pausing.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):I think for kids, they judge that those having white hair are old. For men, they'd address them as "Gong Gong".


  42. Recalling.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I asked them to sing a Happy Birthday song to "Grandma". I made a mistake. She's their Great Grandma!


  44. Smiling.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My state of mind on age is at least one generation behind.


  46. Pausing.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I like to think that I've been so engaged in living my life that I've forgotten my age.


  48. EXT. ESTATE - 19:45


  49. Roadside. Peter and his wife check out several bags from the car.


  50. PETER: Oh, some many gifts, as if we won't meet again in the Chinese New Year.


  51. WIFE: You never know if Omicron cases may grow exponentially.


  52. PETER: True.


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. SITTING ROOM - 23:00


  55. Peter and his wife are watching TV.


  56. PETER (V.O.): Today's gathering was very enjoyable. We hadn't chatted with relatives in person for a long time.


  57. Pausing.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Talking and eating together, we've become more thoughtful and hopeful.


  59. Pausing.


  60. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Gathering has its magic power. It makes us feel more alive without skipping a few beats.


  61. THE END.


  62. FADE OUT





















 
 
 

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