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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

Mundane Monday?

  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STUDY - DAY


  4. Phone in hand, PETER is pondering.

  5. PETER (V.O.): It's Monday again. I only have a dental appointment.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Would it be a mundane Monday? Let me first change my Monday mindset and do something mindful.


  8. Peter checks his Quora notifications.


  9. PETER (V.O.): A Quoran is asking me the best positive way to send a farewell email to colleagues.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I believe the message should be a personal, emotive and true.

  12. Having typed his reply, Peter sees an incoming phone message.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, my wealth manager is checking if I could see her. Okay, I'll go back to my chambers to do something first.

  14. Act 2


  15. SEQUENCE OF PETER'S MONDAY (11.am - 3pm)


  16. A. In his chambers, Peter collects some papers from a SECRETARY.


  17. B. Sitting at the front row of the upper deck of a Causeway Bay tram, Peter takes photos like a tourist.


  18. C. Inside a bank, a wealth MANAGER is preparing some papers for Peter to sign.


  19. D. Inside a Cha Chaan Teng, Peter is having soup, fried beef noodles and coffee.


  20. E. Inside a MTR cabin, Peter captures an uncommon scene before getting off.


  21. END SEQUENCE


  22. INT. DENTAL CLINIC - AFTERNOON


  23. Treatment room. Peter is being attended to by a DENTIST and a NURSE.


  24. DENTIST: Today. we'll do dental cleaning and the X-ray of your wisdom teeth.


  25. PETER: Dental cleaning?


  26. DENTIST: The service has been resumed since last week. You last postponed it.


  27. PETER: I'm lucky then.


  28. DENTIST: The cleaning will be a little uncomfortable.


  29. PETER: I can endure that.


  30. Having done all the preparations, the Dentist, with the nurse's assistance, begins to work on Peter's teeth with a mouth mirror and a high-speed handpiece.


  31. PETER (V.O.): I haven't had my teeth cleaned by a Dentist since the pandemic. The working is pretty routine. But I can't control my gag reflex.


  32. DENTIST: Relax.


  33. PETER (V.O.): My uncontrollable tongue is blocking the Dentist's tools.


  34. DENTIST: Lower your jaw.


  35. PETER (V.O.): Oh, I don't know I've been raising my jaw as if I'm doing backstroke. I'm very tense.


  36. Peter lowers his jaw.


  37. DENTIST: Open your mouth.


  38. PETER (V.O.): Oh, yes, it's nearly closed.


  39. Peter opens his mouth.


  40. DENTIST: Wider, if you can.


  41. PETER (V.O.): I thought it was wide-open already.


  42. Peter struggles to meet the expectation.


  43. DENTIST: Yes.


  44. PETER (V.O.): So discomforting.


  45. DENTIST: Maintain the position. Nearly finishing now...


  46. No more machine sounds.


  47. DENTIST (Cont'd): Done!


  48. PETER (V.O.): So embarrassing.


  49. Peter takes a deep breath.


  50. Later, in the X-ray room, the Nurse does the X-rays for Peter. Then, Peter returns to the Treatment room to learn about the result of the diagnosis.


  51. DENTIST: Your wisdom teeth are reasonably healthy. But you've to upkeep them for longer-term use.

  52. PETER: Dr, I'm 67. How durable would be my wisdom teeth?


  53. DENTIST: For about 20 years.

  54. PETER (V.O.): That exceeds my life-expectancy by two years.


  55. Act 3


  56. SEQUENCE OF PETER'S MONDAY (4 pm - 8 pm)


  57. A. In a newly-opened mall, there is an art exhibition. Peter examines some miniature works and tries to find angles to capture images.


  58. B. In another modern mall, Peter buys a modern fan in a stylish household store.


  59. C. In an estate park, Peter is jogging in the rain.


  60. END SEQUENCE


  61. INT. STUDY - NIGHT


  62. The TV is reporting China's new 3-child policy.


  63. PETER (V.O.): The Chinese civilisation is entering the phase of abundance.


  64. Pausing


  65. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Today isn't mundane. I've brought the sublime into it, making the day special to me.


  66. FADE OUT.


  67. THE END


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