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Nothing Stays

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 1 hour ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. PO FOOK MEMORIAL HALL - 08:40


  4. Getting off a shuttle, PETER enters. At Emily's room, the air smells of incense and lilies. ATTENDANT#1 nods and lets Peter inside.


  5. A small Buddhist-style alter. A framed photo of Emily sits at the center. An incense urn before it.

  6.  

  7. ATTENDANT#1: You burn incense?


  8. Peter nods.


  9. PETER (V.O.): I do that for Emily.


  10. Attendant#1 lights three sticks from a box. The tips grow orange, then settle into thin grey smoke. He passes them to Peter who places them into the urn. Peter gazes at Emily's photo.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): You did well. Nothing stays. And that's okay.


  12. Later, after some rituals, ATTENDANTS#2 &3 emerge, guiding a wheeled guerney. On it, Emily's coffin. They position it where the alter stood.


  13. ATTENDANT#1: Last look.


  14. Following a queue, Peter looks down at EMILY. Waxy. Peaceful. Soon, ATTENDANTS#2 &3 lower the lid. It clicks shut.


  15. Act 2


  16. INT. WO HOP SEK CREMATORIUM - 10:00


  17. A simple hall. A plain alter. Emily's framed photo. Behind it, a platform with a closed coffin. The MOURNERS gather in rows, speaking to Emily.

  18.  

  19. MOURNER#1: Emily, you rest now.


  20. MOURNER#2. Emily, no more pain.


  21. MOURNER#3: Emily, no more worries.


  22. PETER: Emily, final farewell. That's that.


  23. Then, LAWRENCE, Emily's husband, presses a button on a small console. We hear a soft hum and see the platform beneath the coffin begining to decend. Slowly. Mechanically. The coffin disappears through the door. Silence.


  24. EXT. FANLING - 10:35


  25. Peter steps off of a coach. He stretches his neck. Then walks. He opens Google Maps on his phone and types: public swimming pool near me. He checks the result.


  26. PETER (V.O.): Fanling public swimming pool. A 7-minute walk.


  27. Open-air public swimming pool. Peter does slow, practised laps. Breaststroke. Freestyle. Backstroke. Butterflystyle.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): No hurry. The pool closes at noon.


  29. He finishes at 11:50. He showers. He dresses.


  30. INT. MALL, FANLING - 12:15


  31. Peter walks along a row of shops.


  32. PETER (V.O.): The nice cha chaan teng I visited a few years ago was here. I wrote a review about it.


  33. He then checks a wall map of mall restaurants.


  34. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's gone. Nothing stays.


  35. Peter enters a restaurant with nice ambiance.


  36. EXT. SHEUNG SHUI - 13:30


  37. Estate coach. Peter sits near the front. The coach winds through roads lined with older buildings, new towers rising behind them. Peter looks out. A corner building. Painted in fresh grey. New alluminium windows. His eyes narrow.


  38. FLASHBACK


  39. EXT. SAME PLACE - NIGHT (Summer 1974)

  40.  

  41. Peter (20) holds hands with SHARON (19). They linger at the same building.


  42. END FLASHBACK


  43. PETER (V.O.): The flat of Sharon's parents was sold in the 1980s.


  44. The coach moves on. Peter blinks.


  45. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 14:15


  46. A three-storey house. A framed photo of Sharon sits in a shelf in the sitting room.


  47. PETER (V.O.): I took the photo while we're visiting Beijing during X'mas, 1987.


  48. Pausing.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Here's our first home. We bought it in 1983, when it was a buyer's market.


  50. Recalling.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I became counsel in 1985, I cooked up the idea to own premises on the Hong Kong island and in Kowloon too.


  52. Pausing.


  53. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): For over 10 years now, only I'd come back occasionally, but I haven't stayed overnight.


  54. Act 3


  55. INT. BEDROOM - 21:45


  56. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It depicts a misty Spring hillside in Hakodate that is alive with ancient cherry blossom trees in delicate full bloom, their fleeting pink patels a poignant reminder that nothing stays.


  57. PETER (V.O.): The summer of 1974 is gone. But that building's staircase corner - Sharon's breath on my neck, my hands on her back - that never left.


  58. Thinking.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I don't learn to let go. I learn to carry the weight without asking why the weight is still there.


  60. Reflecting.


  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The clock still ticks in my NT home no one sleeps in. That's not sadness. It's a different kind of staying.


  62. The END


  63. FADE OUT


 
 
 

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