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One Birthday

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Apr 18
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. LIVING ROOM - 11:30 (Yesterday)


  4. Soft grey light filters through the curtains. PETER stares at his phone's calendar.


  5. PETER (V.O.): About our grandchild to be born and this year's cherry blossoms...


  6. Daydreaming.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): What if our grandchild comes - not dangerously early. Not prematurely...


  8. Daydreaming.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Just...efficiently...healthy, loud and perfect... before the due date.


  10. Daydreaming.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): So that my wife and I can fly to Hokkaido to see the cherry blossoms as planned. Non-refundable air tickets used. Not wasted.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Our grandchild was smart enough not to come yesterday when her mother had an important exam.


  14. Act 2


  15. INT. BEDROOM - 07:58 (Today)


  16. Peter checks a WhatsApp message: Water broke. Heading to the hospital now.


  17. PETER (V.O.): Hmm...my elder son sent the message hours ago.


  18. Peter researches with his phone and reads the results.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My daughter-in-law will likely deliver within the next 12-18 hours.


  20. Recalling.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Daydreams and possibilities are sometimes the same thing.


  22. Peter smiles.


  23. FLASHBACK


  24. INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY (A fortnight ago)


  25. Peter sits on the sofa with his WIFE.


  26. PETER: About our late April trip to Hokkaido...


  27. WIFE: Air tickets bought nearly 10 months ago. Non-refundable.


  28. PETER: The price was right. But the period overlaps with our daugher-in-law's due date.


  29. WIFE: We've discussed this...


  30. WIFE (Cont'd): We can chase cherry blossoms every year. But we only get one day our grandchild arrives...


  31. PETER: I think we forgo the trip...


  32. PETER (V.O.): The non-refundable air tickets are things. Our grandchild's breath isn't a thing. It's the only thing.


  33. WIFE: We wait until April 20...


  34. Peter nods.


  35. PETER: I've researched that babies born on their due date account for about 5-6% of births.


  36. RETURN TO PRESENT


  37. MONTAGE OF PETER AND HIS WIFE AT A HOSPITAL


  38. A. Department of Obstetrics & Gynaecology - 18:30. Peter and his wife find their way.


  39. B. Hallway - 18:45. They and their elder SON discuss seriouly before son returns to the labour ward.


  40. C. Hallway: 19:30. The son comes out from the labour ward with big smiles. They hug.


  41. D. Hallway. 20:20. They have a glimpse of the proud MOTHER and her NEWBORN on a patient trolley being transferred to another ward.


  42. END MONTAGE


  43. INT. PICI - 21:00


  44. Elegant. Soft light. Peter and his wife sit at a corner table. A single candle between them.


  45. PETER: To our grandchild.


  46. They touch glasses.


  47. PETER (Cont'd): To the only birthday that matters.


  48. Then, they notice two WAITRESSES serve a small birthday cake to a table of six nearby. And they sing: Happy Birthday to you...The TABLE cheers. A WOMAN (30s) thanks them.


  49. Later, the sound repeats again - this time farther from their table. Peter doesn't bother to turn around.


  50. PETER (V.O.): There is only one birthday. Today proved it. Our grandchild was born. This is a birthday. Others are fakes.


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. LIVING ROOM - 23:30


  53. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows a small birthday cake candle lit atop a cake slice placed on a plate.


  54. PETER (V.O.): There is only one birthday. The day when one was born. Every "birthday" after that is an anniversary of a birthday. Which is a different thing.


  55. Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): One birthday. One truth. All the rest is love dressed up as tradition - and that's fine too.


  57.  Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A grandchild's birth is a real birthday. Everything else - every dinner, every cake, every song - is just loving repetition.


  59. The END


  60. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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