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Reasonably Well

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Apr 14
  • 3 min read
  1. Act 1


  2. INT. LIVING ROOM - 9:30


  3. PETER sits on a sofa. He holds a cracked smartphone.


  4. On the screen: Duolingo. A cartoon owl glares at him. Peter taps an icon: A Spanish flag.


  5. A VOICE (from phone): Estoy apprendiendo piano.


  6. Peter repeats into the phone.


  7. PETER (to phone): Estoy apprendiendo piano.


  8. Later, Peter checks his Spanish streak: 709-day streak.


  9. Peter allows himself a small smile. He then taps another icon: A French flag.


  10. A VOICE (from phone): Je joue du piano tous les jours.


  11. Peter repeats into the phone.


  12. PETER (to phone) (Cont'd): Je joue du piano tous les jours.


  13. Then, we hear: CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRT. A power drill. From upstairs.


  14. Act 2


  15. INT. LIVING ROOM - 12:30


  16. The drilling has stopped.


  17. PETER (V.O.): How nice it is without that loud, aggressive noise.


  18. Peter takes the piano seat, his fingers hover over the keys.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): See how much of the song I can bring back.


  20. FLASHBACK


  21. INT. TITTORI AIRPORT - NOON (Sept 2024)


  22. Small and quiet. In the middle of the terminal, a public yellow piano. And there is Peter - in casual wear - sitting on the bench. His hands play "A Summer Place."


  23. PETER (V.O.): Since I'm never tired of listening to this musical piece, I decided to learn to play it on the piano.


  24. Relaxing melody - Peter puts his heart into it.


  25. A woman TOURIST starts filming Peter's performance, and Peter notices.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm surprised that someone would film my first public piano performance.


  27. Peter continues, playing reasonably well. After he finishes, she claps.


  28.  PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): How encouraging - it really means a lot.


  29. END FLASHBACK


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Now I want to play like the young blind man - the one at the recital two weeks ago. He played with another pianist a four-hands piece by Mozart.


  31. Recalling.


  32. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He didn't see the keys. But he played beautifully.


  33. Pausing.


  34. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I admired his confidence. The flow.


  35. Peter plays the intro, and the verses, then stops at the chorus - right before it kicks in.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I need to follow the online tuturial to help me play it the right way.


  37. Peter opens the Redmi Pad 2 and taps an online piano tutorial.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): That's how I learned to play "A Summer Place".


  39. Just as he is about to continue, we hear CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRT.


  40. Peter doesn't stop. He launches into the song's chorus.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I remember the blind pianist's face. He focuses on the music...I won't hear the noise.


  42. The song's chorus emerges - halting, fragile, but recognizable.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Age and late start aren't barriers to growth.


  44. The drill continues: RRRRRRRRRT. RRRRRRRRRT.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I play louder.


  46. The drill responds in kind.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We're playing a special four-hands duet - we coexist in mutual irritation.


  48. Pausing.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): See if I can imagine the music without hearing the noise.


  50. Peter starts again from the beginning.


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. LIVING ROOM - 22:00


  53. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows some visuals that Peter uses to learn to play the piano.


  54. PETER (V.O.): Reasonable isn't mediore. Reasonable is the bridge between "I can't" and "I did".


  55. Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The drill doesn't care how good I'm. The drill only cares that I keep playing. And that's why reasonably well always wins.


  57.  Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm never going to be great. But I'm, against all odds, reasonably well. And that is more than enough to answer a drill.


  59. The END


  60. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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