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The First Day of the Rest of Them

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 1 day ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 00:22


  4. Sound of gentle keyboard typing, a clock ticking.


  5. He glances at the time. Exhales, rubs his temples.


  6. PETER (V.O.): At least 25 hours. That's what I need. 24 is a joke.


  7. As he reaches for the mouse, he hears a soft DING.


  8. His phone lights up. WhatsApp: Emily passed away last week. Cancer. Fast.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Spam. Getting clever.


  10. Peter scrolls their chat history and sees a photo of them.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's from Dominic. Emily's student. OMG!


  12. Peter freezes. Then he replies: So sudden...


  13. He looks back at his work on the screen. Slowly, he hits publish.


  14. Act 2


  15. INT. BEDROOM - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS


  16. Peter scrolls his chat history with Emily.


  17. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Last message was Feb 17, 2026. She sent me Chinese New Year greetings and I reciprocated.


  18. Thinking.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): She was alright then...


  20. Peter walks through the corridor towards the living room to join his WIFE who is watching TV.


  21. PETER: My friend Emily, from the legal translation sector, passed.


  22. Pausing.


  23. PETER (Cont'd): You've never met her. She was around the same age as you.


  24. Pausing.


  25. PETER (Cont'd): We've to enjoy ourselves while we can!


  26. EXT. GOLDEN BAY - 15:15


  27. Sound of waves, wind and BEACHGOERS.


  28. Peter swims breast strokes towards an orange bouy line 200 meters ahead.


  29. A wave slaps his face. He swallows salt water. Once, twice, thrice.


  30. PETER (V.O.): Too much...where's the bouy line?


  31. He pushes on. Strokes. Breathes.


  32. Finally - his hand slaps a buoy. He grips it, panting.


  33. Turns his head.


  34. A raft with one LIFEGUARD is three meters away. Watching him. Ready. Peter stares.


  35. PETER (V.O.) The lifeguard raft was tailing me. That isn't luck. That's love.


  36. Pausing.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): That's how grace works - early, quiet and almost always unnoticed.


  38. Pausing.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Not today. But one day. Something unforeseen.


  40. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 18:48


  41. Peter is playing the piano passionately.


  42. DING. Phone's screen lits up. Anne: Hi Peter... dinner talk on wellness...can you come?


  43. PETER (V.O.): My time is valuable. More than ever now. I know what's good for me. Writing. Swimming. The piano. A real dinner with my wife. Not a lecture on wellness with a price tag.


  44. Pausing.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But it's difficult to say no. Anne means well.


  46. Pausing.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): So does everyone who fills my calendar. But my grave will be dug by well-meaning invitations I never declined.


  48. Peter checks his phone calendar.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Actually, I can't make it, as I'm flying out with my wife to see cheery blossoms in Hokkaido.


  50. Pausing.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Emily would have laughed at me - struggling to say no, even though time is running out.


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. BEDROOM - 23:00


  54. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows a lifeguard raft moving across the choppy Golden Bay


  55. PETER (V.O.): The first day of the rest of them sounds like a beginning. But it sounds exactly the same as the last of them.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I never know which 'first day" is also a "last day". So I treat every single one as both.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And the rest of them start now, whether I'm ready or not.

  60.  

  61. The END


  62. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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