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The Future That Never Disagrees

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • May 13
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 08:05


  4. Sitting up in bed, PETER is clouded with thought. His phone glows in his hand.


  5. A Facebook post: Be responsible for your future self. Your future self can't disagree with what you're doing now.


  6. Peter stares. Lowers the phone.


  7. PETER (V.O.): Can't disagree...unless they don't exist.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In my 20s -30s, I was like a machine. Work and study. Study and work. No weekends. No waste - 200% efficiency.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I thought my logic was perfect. If I could only live to 36, I'd have done 72 years of living.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My future self couldn't complain. A wife, a career and properties.


  14. Act 2


  15. FLASHBACK


  16. EXT. COACH - FANLING - 10:15 (May 7, 2026)


  17. Peter sits by the window, two rows behind a cluster of family MEMBERS.


  18. We hear: ...the columnbariam...the waiting time.


  19. The coach pulls into a stop. Peter and late Emily's SIBLINGS get off. They see a large Taoist temple nearby.


  20. SISTER: Peter, we're thinking of depositing Emily's urn here. It's convenient.


  21. Peter looks at the Temple. Then at her.


  22. PETER: It isn't Buddhist.


  23. SISTER: It's Taoist...do you think Emily would disagree?


  24. The question hangs in the air.


  25. Peter opens his mouth. Closes it. He doesn't nod. He doesn't shake his head. He simply looks away - towards the temple gates.


  26. FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  27. INT. HOME, NT - DAY (Aug 1992)


  28. Sitting room, G/F. Peter (38) and a weak SHARON (36) sit side by side on a sofa. Peter points to a most prominent section of a shelf.


  29. PETER: I'll put you right there.


  30. Sharon looks at that secion of the shelf. Then at him. Her eyes are calm. She says nothing.


  31. PETER (V.O.): Here is our home, alive or dead.


  32. END FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  33. PETER (V.O.): I placed Sharon's urn there about a month later.


  34. Peter looks lost. Soon, they part at the station.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Earlier. she told me that when Emily (65) got the diagnosis of terminal cancer in mid March, she didn't want to die.


  36. Sighing.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): She lived 31 more days.


  38. RETURN TO PRESENT


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Be responsible for your future self, they say.


  40. Pausing.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): This argument assumes a promise. That the future self will be there to be grateful. Or to disagree.


  42. Pausing.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But our future self can't even guarantee their own heartbeat. Who's responsible for that?


  44. Pausing.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Emily's future self didn't choose to die. It just happened.


  46. Pausing.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A life compressed to 200% efficiency still ends at 100% death. Since Sharon's untimely death, I've reinterpreted my equation. I've become kind to my present self.


  48. Pausing.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I know the present doesn't protect me. The future doesn't promise me. I'm holding a paradox with no handles.


  50. The phone screen goes dark beside him.


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. BEDROOM - 22:15


  53. Peter uploads an image of a signage at Huizhou West Lake to a draft on his laptop. It suggests an entrance to the future.


  54. PETER (V.O.): The future that never disagrees is the easiet master to serve. And the easiest to betray - because it never writes back.


  55.  Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can mortgage my present for a future that never complains. But a future that never arrives doesn't owe me gratitude either.


  57. Reflecting.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The only honest stance: Do the next thing. Not because it serves my future self, Because right now, I'm alive enough to choose.


  59. The END


  60. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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