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The Long Sleep

Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
Peter K F Cheung SBS
1 day ago
3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 10:02


  4. Soft daylight fills a modest bedroom. The bedside digital clock reads: 10:02. PETER stretches. He turns his head to look at the clock.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Oh, 10 hours.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The dreams were vivid. Not the usual jumble. The characters. The scenes. The actions. Just...replayed.


  8. He takes a deep, unhurried breath.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I feel the air filling my lungs.


  10. He swings his legs out of bed with agility.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I feel new...Like someone took out all the batteries, gave them a good charge, and put them back in.


  12. He touches his chest, feeling the steady heartbeat.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Unlike my recent travels, I'm not chasing the day. The day can come to me.


  14. Act 2


  15. FLASHBACK


  16. INT/EXT. ASASHI ONSEN, YUMOTO YUKOMANSOU - 6:45 (18 Sept, 2026)


  17. Premium. Hotel room. Peter is already awake while his WIFE is fast asleep.


  18. PETER (V.O.): After a late night onsen, I slept right away. My wife slept late. She needs to find the mapcodes of places that we should explore.


  19. Peter grabs his phone.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've seven Duolingo streaks to maintain.


  21. Pausing.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I also want to do a quick onsen before our scheduled breakfast at 8.am


  23. Peter goes to the bathroom and starts practising Japanese.


  24. Onsen. 7:30. Steam rises from the outdoor rock pool. Peter is alone, soaking.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The water is hot. The air is cool.


  26. Restaurant. 8:00. Peter and his wife take their seats at a reserved table.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The breakfasts at onsen hotels are similar.


  28. Shopping corner. Peter's wife checks if there's any item she must buy.


  29. PETER: You take your time. I need to go to the toilet,


  30. Room. 9:50. Peter's wife is finishing her make-up. Peter is doing a final check of the room.


  31. PETER: The check-out time is 10:00...


  32. Front desk. 9:55. They are with their baggage. Peter hands over the keys. The STAFF checks the monitor, nods and then bows. They bow back.


  33. PETER: Good. We're in time. I read a Google review that the hotel takes the check-out time very seriously.


  34. Carpark. 10:00. Peter is putting their baggage inside a Toyota Pruis e-four.


  35. WIFE: Go ahead and start the car while I punch in our mapodes.


  36. EXT. 4TH OBSERVATORY, DAISETSUZAN, ASAHIDAKE - 11:07


  37. They stand before a breathtaking vista of lakes and a not-too-distant volcano. They capture the moments with their phones.


  38. PETER: Since we can see steam coming out from the volcano, we shouldn't climb it.


  39. EXT. TOLL ROAD - 16:45


  40. Inside their rental car. Peter is driving, his wife navigating.


  41. WIFE: If we miss the exit, we won't make the next onsen hotel before sunset.


  42. PETER: Have you booked dinner at the hotel?


  43. WIFE: Yes...and check in has to be done well before 6pm.

  44.  

  45. PETER: Got it...I won't miss it...alert me...you know my eyesight is deteriorating.


  46. INT. SOUNKYO CHOYOTEI, KAMIKAWA - 17:15


  47. Luxurious. Front desk. Peter's wife is negotiating with a RECEPTIONIST.


  48. RECEPTIONIST: Your dinner session is at 5:30pm. No other choice. Sorry.


  49. Peter wife isn't happy about having no choice.


  50. PETER: That should be fine this time, since we want to watch the light show before it closes at 9pm.


  51. WIFE: So, dinner in 15 minutes.


  52. RETURN TO PRESENT


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. BEDROOM -22:00


  55. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows interactive lighting effects where Autumn leaves scatter in response to human movement, along with fantastic digital art illuminated by LEDs - the "Miracle Illuminate" at Kamikawa, Hokkaido on 18 Sept, 2026.


  56. PETER (V.O.): A long sleep is not an escape from life. It's life's way of letting me catch up with myself.


  57. Thinking.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The onsen soaked my body. The long sleep soaked my soul. Rest isn't a reward for finishing. It's the way I begin again.


  59. Reflecting.

  60.  

  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The best sightseeing is the journey back to myself. The best destination is a good night's sleep after a day well-lived.


  62. The END


  63. FADE OUT


 
 
 

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