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The Weight of Small Lives

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 17 minutes ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STICKS & FIRE - 20:02


  4. The restaurant glows with low, amber light. A MAN plays the guitar and sings. PETER and his WIFE sit across each other at a small table, plates untouched for a moment.


  5. PETER: I can still feel it. The weight.


  6. WIFE: The baby?


  7. PETER: Yes, our grandchild isn't heavy.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (Cont'd): And yet. Like holding a unverse.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (Cont'd): I feel that I've to be around...


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And you saved the family turtle in the afternoon.


  14. Act 2


  15. FLASHBACK


  16. EXT. CAR PARK, SILVERSTRAND - 13:15 (Earlier today)


  17. Having parked his SMART car, Peter checks a WhatsApp notification: Did you see the turtle?


  18. PETER (V.O.): No.


  19. Peter types his reply on screen. He gets a remark instantly: It isn't in his small house, and I can't find him at home.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Not at home? Unless he has climbed out of the window and fallen from our high-rise apartment.


  21. Peter types his remarks on screen.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): If he fell, it'd be fatal.


  23. EXT. ESTATE BLOCK - 12:30


  24. G/F. A damp-haired Peter scans the ground.


  25. PETER (V.O.): Nothing. That's good.


  26. He lifts his gaze to the upper floors and spots a temporary gondola suspended there.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): That gondola could serve as a safe harbour for anything falling from above.


  28. Then, Peter notices his wife beside, her gaze tracking his upward - arriving at the same unspoken conclusion.


  29. PETER: If he fell, he might have struck the gondola - the one place that could have caught him.


  30. WIFE: I believe so. However, today is Labour Day and no one is working.


  31. PETER: I now have the apetite to eat.


  32. INT. NOODLE SHOP - 14:45


  33. Soon after placing his order, Peter gets a WhatsApp notification: I've found him! And then an image of a turtle trapped between furniture.


  34. Peter types his response immediately: Is he alright? And then he gets an image of a watchful turtle in the shower.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We're relieved!


  36. Peter drifts into thought.

  37. .

  38. FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  39. EXT. EXPRESSWAY TO NIBORIBETSU - 18:00 (27 April, 2026)


  40. The sun is low. In a Susuki Gear, Peter is navigating, his wife driving. Peter spots a small bird flying low right across the lane. Then, we hear a sound at the car's grille.


  41. WIFE: What's it?


  42. PETER: A small bird...


  43. WIFE: Is that right?


  44. PETER: There was nothing we could do.


  45. WIFE: When I was learning to drive, my instructor said I could never hit a bird - it'd always fly out of the way.


  46. PETER: My instructor told me the same - without a hint of doubt.


  47. EXT. HOTEL CAR PARK - 20:30


  48. Peter and his wife see it at the same moment - the small bird, lifeless, caught in the car's grille. It hasn't fallen away.


  49. With trembling hands, Peter's wife reaches forward and gently works the small body free, struggling against the metal that holds it.


  50. WIFE: Forgive me. I never meant to hurt you.


  51. The grille has snapped the bird's neck - left it pinned there, as if the moment refused to end.


  52. RETURN TO PRESENT


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. BEDROOM - 22:15


  55. Peter uploads an image of the family turtle to a draft on his laptop.


  56. PETER (V.O.): The newborn in our arms, the turtle wedged between furniture, the bird veering towards danger - each asks the same question: Do I matter? The answer is always yes.


  57. Thinking.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A grandchild teaches us the weight of the future. A rescued pet teaches us the weight of the present. A lost bird teaches us the weight of the past - and that we can hold all three at once.


  59. Reflecting.


  60. The ENDhV.O.) (Cont'd): The weight of small lives is the gravity of tenderness. It holds us to the earth when everything else tries to float away.


  61. The END


  62. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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