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Three In a Row

Writer's picture: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS
  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. ROADS - DAY


  4. PETER in his green New Beetle arrives at a car-testing centre.


  5. PETER (V.O): Those serving me for the past two days might be shocked to find that I'm here again - three in a row.


  6. STAFF#1 greets Peter as he steps out of the car.


  7. PETER: Car testing.


  8. STAFF#1: I'll lead you to the reception.


  9. PETER: It's alright. I've been here and know my way.


  10. INT. RECEPTION - DAY


  11. STAFF#2 works on something. Staff#3 & #4 serve Peter.


  12. PETER (V.O.): Staff#2 took my appointment calls. Staff#3 is responsible for payment. Staff#4 is a new face.


  13. STAFF#4: The car testing may take more than 30 minutes. Just enjoy yourself at the waiting room.


  14. Peter nods.


  15. Art 2


  16. INT. WAITING ROOM - LATER


  17. Sipping a cup of coffee, Peter reads a magazine on a sofa.


  18. PETER (V.O.): Here, the coffee is nice and the magazines are new.


  19. Recalling.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Before its re-opening a week ago, I went to another car-testing centre to test my 25-year old Eunos 30X.


  21. Recalling.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The drinks wasn't as good, and the magazines were one year old.


  23. Recalling.


  24. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): There wasn't any service. I had difficulty to drive away my car. The experience was unpleasant.


  25. Pausing.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was so pleased that this brand's car testing centre has reopened. I have frequented its service for many years.


  27. Pausing.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): For the past two days, I've got two cars tested as roadworthy.


  29. Pausing.


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In fact, I don't have to do three in a row, as the New Beetle licence won't expire until Jan 2021.


  31. Pausing.


  32. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But as a loyal customer, I'd do my repeated purchases without hesitation.


  33. The TV reports that Hong Kong begins to feel the 4th wave of COVID-19 infection.


  34. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Nature's way can be very disruptive.


  35. Recalling.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Months ago, I'd to make an advance appointment with the Transport Department before I could renew my SMART's registration licence.


  37. STAFF#5 appears with a transparent L-shape sheet protector with sheets inside.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can see my New Beetle's registration licence and the roadworthy certificate. Three in a row. Great!


  39. STAFF#5 presents Peter with the stuff.


  40. STAFF#5: The sheet protector is also for you.


  41. PETER: Thank you!


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Little things make great difference.


  43. Recalling.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I didn't get the free sheet protector yesterday and the day before yesterday.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Not only to be good, they want to do better.


  47. STAFF#5 (Kindly): It seems that your car can be better maintained. Go to a repairer and check it out. Your car might not pass the test next time.


  48. Peter nods.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): This is value-added advisory service to the customer. That's why I love the service of this car-testing centre.


  50. At an exit, Peter collects his New Beetle.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The co-ordinated service demonstrates very good teamwork. I can feel that.


  52. Act 3


  53. EXT. ROADS - LATER


  54. Peter in his New Beetle moves swiftly.


  55. PETER (V.O.): Having had a long day last Tuesday, I've had three happy days in a row.


  56. Pausing.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Now, I've got three clean bills of health of three cars manufactured in 2000, 2001 and 2002.


  58. Pausing.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In those years, I contained my desire by buying one new car a year. The last one I bought was the SMART in 2003.


  60. Pausing.


  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Since then, I've been hoarding them. And I could have the unique experience of testing my old cars three in a row. I'll go again for my other cars early next year.


  62. Reflecting.


  63. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Do I enjoy it?


  64. Pausing.


  65. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I feel good that they're still reasonably healthy. I've to act responsibly towards them.


  66. Peter in his New Beetle arrives at a car repairer.


  67. FADE OUT.


  68. THE END


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