Two Dollars & Silent Gaps
- Peter K F Cheung SBS
- 2 days ago
- 3 min read
FADE IN
Act 1
INT. LIVING ROOM - 09:15
Morning light fills the room. PETER places a swim bag on the sofa. He opens it and extracts a single two-dollar coin. He holds it up, the morning light catching its silver edge.
PETER (V.O.): I need it to operate the locker in the changing room.
Peter puts the two-dollar coin back into the bag. Then, he picks up from a coffee table one of his seven handheld devices. He begins to tap the screen.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I have seven Duolingo streaks to maintain daily.
Soon, we hear a cheerful, celebratory chime ringing out in the quiet room. Peter allows a small, pleased nod. He places the phone down, reaches for another and taps the Duolingo app.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It'll take a few seconds to load the language lessons.
As he waits, Peter picks up another phone and swipes open Facebook.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Apart from Duolingo, I'm also following another language platform.
Peter strolls mechanically. Soon, a feed on learning Japanese appears. His eyes fix at the pretty tutor. Then, we hear a lesson starting chime from the other phone.
Act 2
EXT. KAU YUK ROAD, YUEN LONG - 12:15
A swim bag slung over his shoulder, Peter exits from the Yuen Long Swimming Pool. He walks past a massive construction site. High fences, cranes, the skeleton of a new stadium rising.
PETER (V.O.): Oh, the Yuen Long Stadium is being rebuilt.
FLASHBACK
INT. CLASSROOM - DAY (Late 1966)
Peter (12) listens to the TEACHER with a mix of anxiety and concentration.
TEACHER: Two dollars for the Yuen Long Stadium. It's for the community.
PETER (V.O.): Two dollars? It's 20 bus rides and 10 breakfast.
TEACHER (Cont'd): Show your school spirit. Every one should contribute.
FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK
INT. HOME - NIGHT
Peter speaks to his MOTHER timidly.
PETER: Ma...the school fee for this month. Today is already the 5th...
His mother reacts angrily.
MOTHER: School fee again? Where do you think money comes from? Your Dad ears a few dollars a day for a family of seven.
Peter shrinks.
END FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And two dollars more for a stadium?
Peter stares at the teacher's expectant face.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I hate asking. I hate being poor.
RETURN TO PRESENT
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And when the Stadium was finally built, I never set foot in it. Nothing. It was never for boys like me.
Peter then walks a little further, arriving at the Yuen Long Community Services Building.
FLASHBACK
INT. YUEN LONG TOWN HALL - DAY 1971
The same location, but the building is older. Peter (17), now taller, with intense eyes, walks up the steps with a stack of books to the library.
PETER (V.O.): The library's books are irrelevant to my matriculation syllabus.
Peter sits at a reading desk and puts down his textbooks.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Here's my sanctuary between my lessons in my school nearby. It's silent and free.
Peter starts doing his homework.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I work as a waiter on Sundays and on weekdays from 4.pm - 11pm. Starting homework after work is hard.
RETURN TO PRESENT
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I matriculated in the Summer of 1973. But not good enough. The HKU door stayed shut.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I gave two dollars and received a lifetime of remembering how heavy small coins can feel.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My eduation wasn't built in classrooms, but in the silent gaps between obligations.
Act 3
INT. LIVING ROOM - 21:30
Peter uploads a photo showing the Yuen Long Stadium being rebuilt on the left and the Yuen Long Community Services Building on the right to a draft on his laptop.
PETER (V.O.): Two dollars and silent gaps - the first was the price of existing in the world, the second was the cost of building my own.
Thinking.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Two dollars spoke of what I lacked. The silent gaps whispered what I could become.
Reflecting.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I traded two dollars for a memory and filled the silent gaps with a destiny.
The END
FADE OUT
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