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When Silence Speaks

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Apr 4, 2025
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1

  3.  

  4. INT. LIVING ROOM - 10:00


  5. Cluttered with memories. PETER sits on a sofa, reading WhatsApp messages.


  6. PETER (V.O.): Oh, a chambermate who was four years older than me has passed away.

  7.  

  8. Reading.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Why do people always respond with "Rest in Peace"?


  10. Researching.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The phrase does imply that life is often filled with struggles and turmoil.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I don't respond with "Rest in Peace" because I believe in hoping for serenity in life.


  14. Pausing.


  15. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I responded with an "Oh" when I learned that my good friend Sam passed away.


  16. Act 2

  17.  

  18. EXT. ESTATE PARK - 16:00

  19.  

  20. A warm sun. Peter sets Dai Gou, the family turtle, on the grass. He watches him crawl, lost in thought.


  21. PETER (V.O.): You're the only one who listens, aren't you?


  22. Peter kneels beside Dai Gou, touching his head affectionately.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But I don't know where my wife has gone. Our maid told me that she won't come home for dinner.


  24. FLASHBACK


  25. EXT. STREET - RIVERSIDE PARK - 13:45 (Today)


  26. On his way home, Peter bumps into his WIFE, who is pushing a pet carrier on a trolley.


  27. PETER (V.O.): So early in the day?


  28. They exchange a glance but say nothing. Peter silently follows them as they walk toward the riverside park.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): She has dressed up too. She must have an engagement scheduled shortly after.


  30. Later, as KAJI, the family pet, relieves itself, Peter watches from a distance.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I know my wife wants to maintain her distance from me.


  32. Pausing.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's all because she knew I couldn't tolerate the narcisistic individual she has been associating with anymore.


  34. Pausing.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Based on her demeanour, it's clear she prefers that individual over me.


  36. Recalling.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Weeks ago, when we're here and she needed my help while I was preoccupied with my phone, she simply called me "Hay," while I always call her "Darling".


  38. Pausing.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Now, I realize it's dismissal, and only I have played my part.


  40. RETURN TO PRESENT


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): She has shut me out for days. And silence leads to emotional distance.


  42. Pausing.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): After swimming and feeling tired, I intended to take a nap before coming here, but the silence was deafening.

  44.  

  45. Following other PASSERS-BY, we then observe Dai Gou energetically climbing up a flower bed, but without success.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He's showcasing the strength of a small turtle.


  47. As soon as Dai Gou successfully climbs the flower bed, we hear a round of applause.


  48. INT. LIVING ROOM - 18:00


  49. Peter sits before the piano, fingers hovering above the keys.


  50. PETER (V.O.): Suddenly, I want to play something different.


  51. Peter begins to play a soft melancholic tune, filling the void of silence.


  52. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm learning to accept changes in relationships.


  53. Then, he stops.


  54. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I may be old, but I'm not done living yet.


  55. Peter's frustration is boiling over.


  56. Act 3

  57.  

  58. INT. LIVING ROOM - 21:00

  59.  

  60. Peter inserts an AI drawing titled: "When Silence Speaks..." to a draft on his laptop.

  61.  

  62. PETER (V.O): Silence can be a canvas, it paints the emotions we daren't voice.


  63. In the background, the Beatles' iconic song "Help!" fills the air.

  64.  

  65. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Amidst the quiet, silence becomes the loudest cry for understanding.


  66. We hear Earl Grant singing: At the end of a rainbow, you'll find a pot of gold... .

  67.  

  68. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): In the stillness of silence, truths often whispers louder than words.


  69.  FADE OUT


  70. END



 
 
 

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