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A Good Day Out

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Jul 8, 2020
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STUDY - NIGHT


  4. Phone in hand, PETER hesitates.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Should I ring my Mum, telling her my plan to have a day out with her tomorrow? The main agenda is to do a statutory declaration in the Yuen Long District Office though.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In her 89 years of age, she has never done a statutory declaration before. She'll worry.


  8. Peter puts aside his phone.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'd better leave it till tomorrow.


  10. INT. STUDY - DAY


  11. Peter shuts down the laptop in front of him.


  12. PETER (V.O.): Time to call Mum now.


  13. After a telephone conversation, Peter packs a few things and leave.


  14. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): She doesn't have to do any voluntary work today. We can have something in a restaurant before going to the District Office.


  15. EXT. ROADS - DAY


  16. Peter is driving. The car radio is on. We hear: ...new coronavirus cases in Hong Kong...


  17. PETER (V.O.): Had I known that, I might not have a day out with my Mum today.


  18. Peter drives on.

  19. Act 2


  20. FLASHBACK


  21. INT. STUDY - NIGHT


  22. Peter is reading an email.


  23. PETER (V.O.): The tax agency requires my Mum and I to file a statutory declaration within a month ie by mid April 2020.


  24. Pausing.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): This is the social distancing time. It's life risky just to meet the bureaucratic demand.


  26. Pausing.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me see if they can do away with the red tape. If not, they should extend time.


  28. END FLASHBACK


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Apologetically, they extended time initially to end July 2020, and further extensions weren't unforeseen.

  30. Pausing.


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Days ago, I thought time was about right for me to take my Mum to transact that.


  32. INT. RESTAURANT - DAY


  33. Peter and his MUM are having tea.


  34. MUM: I've my daily meals here.


  35. Peter nods. A WAITRESS (40s) comes to take order from Peter.


  36. MUM (Proudly): He's my eldest son.


  37. A beat.


  38. Peter pays at the Cashier. The CASHIER (40s) stares at Peter.


  39. MUM (Smiling): He's my eldest son.


  40. PETER (V.O.): My Mum is really proud of me.


  41. EXT. DISTRICT OFFICE - DAY


  42. In the compound, Peter and his Mum are looking around.


  43. MUM: I recall after purchasing our lots in Tin Sum Sun Tsuen in 1959 and 1962, we came here to do the registrations.


  44. PETER: I worked in the offices here from 1976-1980, doing squatter control in the Yuen Long District. This old place looks new to me now.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.): And that was over 40 years ago.


  47. Pausing.


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And we can't delegate others to do the statutory declarations for us.


  49. Pausing.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And, we can still do it.


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. DISTRICT OFFICE - DAY


  53. After declaring before a COMMISSIONER (20s) the truth of a statement, Peter and his Mum get back some signed papers.


  54. PETER: Done!


  55. EXT. DISTRICT OFFICE - DAY


  56. As they leave, Peter takes a few photos,


  57. PETER: Do you want to walk around in Yuen Long?


  58. MUM: We'd better go home.


  59. INT. HOME - DAY


  60. Lots of stuff.


  61. PETER (V.O.): I believe I got my Mum's hoarding DNA.


  62. PETER: Just let me have any stuff that you would like me to have.


  63. After some checking, his Mum lets Peter take three big bags of stuff away.


  64. MUM: Give me a call when you're home.


  65. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd) (Nodding): I'm 66 already.


  66. INT. STUDY - NIGHT


  67. Working behind the computer, Peter checks his phone.


  68. PETER (V.O.): Oh, I've accidentally taken a photo of the shadows of Mum and me.


  69. Pausing.


  70. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's actually a good day out.


  71. Peter inserts the photo to a blog post.


  72. THE END


  73. FADE OUT.


 
 
 

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