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A New Key

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • Oct 25
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. LIVING ROOM - 9:00


  4. Sitting on a sofa with a smartphone in hand, PETER checks an online floral specialist.


  5. PETER (V.O.): A music friend's Mom has passed away. I want to order a funeral flower wreath.


  6. Peter scrutinizes the options.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'd just select a simple but elegant arrangement.


  8. Peter fills the delivery address and the sender's name.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I haven't had a chance to meet my friend's Mom, but for the past few decades, he has returned to Hong Kong every year to visit her.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We've managed to meet nearly every year, but now things have changed...


  12. Peter taps "Pay".


  13. Act 2


  14. FLASHBACK


  15. INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY (14 Oct, 2025)


  16. Smartphone in hand, Peter taps "Pay."


  17. PETER (V.O.): I hadn't intended to join this packaged tour, but when the one that fit my schedule suddenly disappeared, I unexpectedly came across this alternative.


  18. INT. TOURIST ATTRACTION - DAY (21 Oct, 2025)


  19.  A performaing artist passionately plays the erhu on stage. Peter watches and listens attentively.


  20.  PETER (V.O.): The erhu music is so enchanting that I find myself questioning whether she's playing live or simply mimicking the motions while a pre-recorded track plays in the background.


  21. Watching.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):  Based on her playing technique and the rich sound of the music, I'm completely confident that she's performing live.


  23. Appreciating.


  24. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):  She must be an exceptionally talented and disciplined artist.


  25. Pausing.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I play the guitar and the paino already - should I consider learning to the play the urhu as well?


  27. Peter takes photos of the artist's performance.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A life well-lived isn't about staying in one key forever, but about learning the art of the transposition.


  29. RETURN TO PRESENT


  30. EXT. SILVERSTRAND BAY - 16:45


  31. Waves crash. A red flag whips in the wind. Peter, in his swimming briefs, wades into the restless water.


  32. PETER (V.O.): At my age, safety is a relative concept. Discipline, however, isn't. I might not get to 71 by being afraid of the water.


  33. INT. FUNERAL HOME - 19:00


  34. A serene room. A photograph of a white-haired woman is surrounded by flowers. Peter's eyes aren't on the portrait of the deceased, but on the living.


  35. PETER (V.O.): Silas and Michelle are there.  


  36. Peter approaches them, surrounded by a crowd of MOURNERS.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I missed the chance to see them last time, but now they're back.


  38. Later, Silas introduces Peter to CHAING.


  39. SILAS: ...Peter was Sharon's husband and a songwriter....Chaing held the baton as the conductor.


  40. PETER:...Yes, Sharon mentioned you...I wrIte songs to demonstrate that I can create without relying on formal theory.


  41. Pausing.


  42. PETER (Cont'd): Having written several dozen songs all in the key of C, I've noticed they tended to sound similar. Teach me the ways that I might break through that barrier.


  43. CHAING: The key is the home. The tonal center. The piece can wander, create tension in different places.


  44. PETER (V.O.): Grief doesn't change the song of our lives; it changes the key. The notes are the same, but the feeling is entirely different.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):  When the old melody of my life falls silent, I must find the courage to compose in a new key.


  47. PETER: What is interval?


  48. CHAING: The distance from one note to the next. That's where the tension lives. A small step can sound hopeful. A large leap can feel...yearning. Or tragic.


  49. Peter looks enlightened. The Prayers are about to begin.


  50. CHAING (Cont'd): And that tension...it needs to go somewhere.


  51. PETER: The resolution - the conflict and homecoming.


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. BEDROOM -22:30


  54. Peter uploads an image, depicting a performing artist passionately plays the urhu on stage to a draft on his laptop.


  55. PETER (V.O.): Finding a new key isn't about forgetting the old tune; it's about learning to harmonize with my memories.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A new key isn't a betrayal of the past; it is the only way the music of the self can continue to evolve.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The heart, like any great instrument, must be retuned from time to time. A new key isn't a sign of breaking, but of readiness for the next movement.

  60.  

  61.  FADE OUT


  62. END

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