A New Key
- Peter K F Cheung SBS

- Oct 25
- 3 min read
FADE IN
Act 1
INT. LIVING ROOM - 9:00
Sitting on a sofa with a smartphone in hand, PETER checks an online floral specialist.
PETER (V.O.): A music friend's Mom has passed away. I want to order a funeral flower wreath.
Peter scrutinizes the options.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'd just select a simple but elegant arrangement.
Peter fills the delivery address and the sender's name.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I haven't had a chance to meet my friend's Mom, but for the past few decades, he has returned to Hong Kong every year to visit her.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We've managed to meet nearly every year, but now things have changed...
Peter taps "Pay".
Act 2
FLASHBACK
INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY (14 Oct, 2025)
Smartphone in hand, Peter taps "Pay."
PETER (V.O.): I hadn't intended to join this packaged tour, but when the one that fit my schedule suddenly disappeared, I unexpectedly came across this alternative.
INT. TOURIST ATTRACTION - DAY (21 Oct, 2025)
A performaing artist passionately plays the erhu on stage. Peter watches and listens attentively.
PETER (V.O.): The erhu music is so enchanting that I find myself questioning whether she's playing live or simply mimicking the motions while a pre-recorded track plays in the background.
Watching.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Based on her playing technique and the rich sound of the music, I'm completely confident that she's performing live.
Appreciating.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): She must be an exceptionally talented and disciplined artist.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I play the guitar and the paino already - should I consider learning to the play the urhu as well?
Peter takes photos of the artist's performance.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A life well-lived isn't about staying in one key forever, but about learning the art of the transposition.
RETURN TO PRESENT
EXT. SILVERSTRAND BAY - 16:45
Waves crash. A red flag whips in the wind. Peter, in his swimming briefs, wades into the restless water.
PETER (V.O.): At my age, safety is a relative concept. Discipline, however, isn't. I might not get to 71 by being afraid of the water.
INT. FUNERAL HOME - 19:00
A serene room. A photograph of a white-haired woman is surrounded by flowers. Peter's eyes aren't on the portrait of the deceased, but on the living.
PETER (V.O.): Silas and Michelle are there.
Peter approaches them, surrounded by a crowd of MOURNERS.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I missed the chance to see them last time, but now they're back.
Later, Silas introduces Peter to CHAING.
SILAS: ...Peter was Sharon's husband and a songwriter....Chaing held the baton as the conductor.
PETER:...Yes, Sharon mentioned you...I wrIte songs to demonstrate that I can create without relying on formal theory.
Pausing.
PETER (Cont'd): Having written several dozen songs all in the key of C, I've noticed they tended to sound similar. Teach me the ways that I might break through that barrier.
CHAING: The key is the home. The tonal center. The piece can wander, create tension in different places.
PETER (V.O.): Grief doesn't change the song of our lives; it changes the key. The notes are the same, but the feeling is entirely different.
Pausing.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When the old melody of my life falls silent, I must find the courage to compose in a new key.
PETER: What is interval?
CHAING: The distance from one note to the next. That's where the tension lives. A small step can sound hopeful. A large leap can feel...yearning. Or tragic.
Peter looks enlightened. The Prayers are about to begin.
CHAING (Cont'd): And that tension...it needs to go somewhere.
PETER: The resolution - the conflict and homecoming.
Act 3
INT. BEDROOM -22:30
Peter uploads an image, depicting a performing artist passionately plays the urhu on stage to a draft on his laptop.
PETER (V.O.): Finding a new key isn't about forgetting the old tune; it's about learning to harmonize with my memories.
Thinking.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A new key isn't a betrayal of the past; it is the only way the music of the self can continue to evolve.
Reflecting.
PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The heart, like any great instrument, must be retuned from time to time. A new key isn't a sign of breaking, but of readiness for the next movement.
FADE OUT
END





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