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Carry You Differently

  • Writer: Peter K F Cheung SBS
    Peter K F Cheung SBS
  • 1 day ago
  • 3 min read
  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 20:00


  4. Cluttered. Sitting up in bed, PETER strolls slowly.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Here's a HKUST Father's Day video clip. I didn't see it yesterday.


  6. We see a cheerful cartoon scene where colourful balloons float in the air. Then the camera cuts to reveal a father walking in while carrying his son, and the son holds onto the ballons.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It reminds me of the 2009 Pixar film: UP.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The balloons are beautiful. But they're not the point. The point is what you carry when they're gone.


  10. He reads the text, his lips moving silently.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Dream bigger. Reach higher.


  12. He sets his phone down.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My father never said any of that.


  14. Act 2


  15. FLASHBACK


  16. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 15:30 (Father's Day 2026)


  17. A cluttered time capsule. Shelves lined with framed photos and books. In one corner, there's a large framed photo of Sharon in black frames. Peter looks through the glass front door.


  18. PETER (V.O.): Ah, our son's car is being parked outside.


  19. Peter then welcomes his SON, DAUGHTER-IN-LAW and GRANDCHILD inside.


  20. SON: Happy Father's day.


  21. PETER: Thank you.


  22. PETER (V.O.) : They meant to visit last Sunday, but the weather wasn't good. Postponing it to Father's Day is even better.


  23. DAUGHTER-IN-LAW: Dad, would you like to hold your grandchild?


  24. PETER: Sure!


  25. Peter gently steps in and takes his grandchild from his daughter-in-law, holding the baby securely and supporting the head and back.


  26. PETER (Cont'd): You're so good.


  27. After they settle on the sofa and have their drinks, Peter makes a solemn opening remark.


  28. PETER: This house is where Mum and Dad started our family story.


  29. Peter takes a look of Sharon's photo.


  30. PETER (Cont'd): Mum had one regret: she said:" I'll never know what our son would become."


  31. PETER (V.O.): That was the thing that broke her. Not the dying young. The not knowing.


  32. PETER (Cont'd): The not knowing...now you're all here.


  33. They gaze at Sharon's photo together.


  34. PETER (V.O.): Turns out our son's a lawyer - not a cellist.


  35. Peter looks at his daughter-in-law.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's beyond Sharon's imagination that her daughter-in-law is a doctor.


  37. Peter watches his son who is still gazing at Mum's photo.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And now, our son is a father.


  39. The grief on Peter's face lifts.


  40. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Sharon should be proud. So proud.


  41. As the baby wants to be heard, Peter's son takes over the holding.


  42. PETER: Let's take a photo together!


  43. Peter snaps a family selfie with Sharon's photo visibly in the background.


  44. END FLASHBACK


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The best fathers don't inspire you to dream bigger. They simply ask: What do you like? And then they make space for it.


  46. Pausing.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Dreaming truer ie the life that fits your hands is the work of a lifetime.


  48. Pausing.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I don't need to reach higher. I need to reach deeper. Into myself. Into the people around me.


  50. Pausing.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My father gave me life and love. That was enough.


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. BEDROOM - 22:00


  54. Peter uploads an image to a draft on his laptop. It shows a white swan curling in the grass near the edge of a lake, lifting its head as sunlight highlights its feathers.


  55. PETER (V.O.): Sharon, you remember how we used to stand here. Swan lake can be quiet and still hold everything.


  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Sharon, you know now. You know everything. And I think you'd say it's enough.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Sharon, I can't bring you back - so I carry you differently.


  60. The END


  61. FADE OUT

 
 
 

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